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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-02 03:37 PM

Doth thee feel thy yearning as do mine so?
Are thy veins filled with thine own fires aglow?
Doth thy heart bleed as doth the blood of mine?
Wilt thee not know that both mine eyes are thine?

When thou art old, wilt thy love remain strong?
Wilt thy fire continue flame for time long?
For thy blood doth boil upon fleeting sight.
My tongue doth cause the warming of thine night.

Look in thy glass thou holds, for mirror shows.
Smell the air pure, thee art of reddest rose.
Through windows of age thy beauty does tell
as memories of youth upon thy mind shall dwell..

Give not your heart against thy own free will
For in mine arms thou wilt remain so still

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

1 posted 2002-02-02 03:42 PM

Pure poetry.Very nice!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-02-02 04:02 PM

Mr Shakespeare i presume

..lovely Barry..nicely written

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-02-02 04:47 PM

Good write Barry! Enjoyed. ~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-02 04:50 PM

WOW!!! WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love the archaic and classic feel of this glorious declaration of love, you are indeed a true modern Shakespeare, flowing with a quill of love! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-02-02 05:04 PM

Good Sire, may thy future dreams appear
in write, my Sire! for assuredly I hear
thy word in all of splendor splendidly splayed before
thy knock, I hear, upon my chamber door...

Good Sire, rejoice! for verily you wend
this token brought by penning, making me amend
my way of thought, my choice of heart
and cause a blushing, rushing of depart...

speak again, good Knight of nights
as one would whisper in the wind...

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-02-02 07:12 PM

Beautiful and romantic Magnus and I very difficult style to write, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-02 11:37 PM

*sigh* a sonnet of such great beauty...*sigh* I love the way you have written this in the old language...it feels like you transport us back in time when love was written this way...BRAVO!!! I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

8 posted 2002-02-03 12:47 PM

My dear sweet friend.Your hear is filled with so much love.Your words are smooth as silk.I love tor ead your writes.

Peaches

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-02-03 09:55 AM

Thank you Sodpossum for your reply..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-02-03 09:55 AM

Vic, thanx...I try...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-02-03 09:56 AM

Nancy, glad you liked it ...different..
but mystical...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-02-03 09:58 AM

Noah...thanx, glad you enjoyed this.
Different...challenging to write..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-02-03 10:00 AM

Karilea...thank you .... enjoy your thoughts.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-02-03 10:01 AM

Floria, thanx...different and difficult...
yes it is...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2002-02-03 10:03 AM

Karen, thank you...always enjoy your
responses....

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