Open Poetry #18 |
First Love ...One Love |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
FIRST LOVE ~ ONE LOVE David, you were my heart and soul How I longed for you to hold me How I longed for you to know Just how much I loved you Why did you have to go I have grown into a woman now And I know you would be proud But oh to see your smiling face In amongst a crowd I would run to you and hold you And never let you go But somewhere in my dream I would wake And find it wasn't so... Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is lovely Roniece, brought me a smile and a tear. Wonderful to read you again, take care! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interesting...I was thinking last night about my first kiss...or was it his first kiss? Memories are good...and thank goodness for first loves... |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
This was so tender even it it's sadness. I believe it is true--that first, one love can remain with us a lifetime and it is never far from our dreams...well said Roniece! PB4S [This message has been edited by PearlsB4Swine (02-02-2002 01:40 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
i remember my first love...my first kiss.. my first date...the first time my heart pounded as I waited... Beautiful poem...thank you... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Young love...first love...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful yet so sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope now you have found true love to hold close to your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) I have recently found my first love, but I still cry for loves kiss all the time for me and my love live far apart and we dream of seeing each other! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Roniece, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so sad, sweet and beautiful, Roniece....and also very well written. My husband's name is also David. I think its a beautiful name. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very beautiful sweet write!! |
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