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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-02 05:18 AM

FIRST LOVE ~ ONE LOVE

David, you were my heart and soul
How I longed for you to hold me
How I longed for you to know
Just how much I loved you
Why did you have to go

I have grown into a woman now
And I know you would be proud
But oh to see your smiling face
In amongst a crowd

I would run to you and hold you
And never let you go
But somewhere in my dream I would wake
And find it wasn't so...

Roniece Dawson-Bruce

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

1 posted 2002-02-02 07:18 AM

This is lovely Roniece, brought me a smile and a tear. Wonderful to read you again, take care!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-02-02 10:40 AM

Interesting...I was thinking last night about my first kiss...or was it his first kiss? Memories are good...and thank goodness for first loves...

PearlsB4Swine
Member

since 2002-02-01

Posts 130
where the heart finds me

3 posted 2002-02-02 10:58 AM

This was so tender even it it's sadness. I believe it is true--that first, one love can remain with us a lifetime and it is never far from our dreams...well said Roniece!
PB4S

[This message has been edited by PearlsB4Swine (02-02-2002 01:40 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-02-02 11:01 AM

i remember my first love...my first kiss..
my first date...the first time my heart
pounded as I waited...

Beautiful poem...thank you...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-02-02 01:28 PM

Young love...first love...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-02-02 01:33 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful yet so sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope now you have found true love to hold close to your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) I have recently found my first love, but I still cry for loves kiss all the time for me and my love live far apart and we dream of seeing each other! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Roniece, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-02-02 02:07 PM

This is so sad, sweet and beautiful, Roniece....and also very well written.
My husband's name is also David.

I think its a beautiful name.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

8 posted 2002-02-02 04:05 PM

Very beautiful sweet write!!

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