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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-01-29 04:37 PM

Stardust glistened within his saddle brown eyes
bucking across the bedroom of my mind
i was lassoed by his opalescent smile
and leather chaps tightly screaming...Whoaaaa

He grazed the meadows of my ruby lips
galloping within bluebonnet eyes
he kissed me beneath a lunar eclipse
within the dark shadows of the moon

I was bound to him like a young calf
surrendering to his advances in the night
cowboy boots beneath my longhorn bed
still there in the Amarillo sunlight

Stardust glistened within his saddle brown eyes
i served chicken fried steak, gravy and fries
buttermilk biscuits and a piece of apple pie
he drank a cup of coffee, and kissed him good bye

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-29-2002 07:57 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-01-29 04:47 PM

Victoria~I love this!!! So sensual and oh...there is something about a cowboy...besides I could almost smell the leather. LOL...great imagery here! He is sooo good looking...in my mind, anyway!

Enjoyed this so much today.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-29 04:57 PM

(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...sooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, I could just envision the pretty yellow-gold sunset as you galloped off into the distance with your cowboy, this is soooooooo gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever feel true loves joy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-01-29 08:43 PM

*sigh* sensually delicious in every way...I love it...Magnificent. **big hugs**

You would be sure to find the way to his heart.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-29 08:45 PM

Hi Victoria, well this was exquisite.
"and leather chaps tightly screaming...Whoaaaa"

And how smart you are, the way to a mans heart is through his stomach and you cooked him a fine meal. love this. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-01-29 09:44 PM

nancy..thank you so much..glad you enjoyed

noah ..thank you sweet noah
floria thank you..yes thats what they say..

karen..im sure..ha..thank you very much for peeking karen

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-01-29 10:47 PM

You and those western lovers..make for wonderful poems ..*s such an imagination you have ~V
hugs
M

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-01-29 11:32 PM

A real Texas poem, Victoria...from a real texas poet!
I like the sensuous feel this has, as well as the beautiful descriptive imagery.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-01-30 01:05 AM

Gosh how I love the imagery you put into your poetry! So much so, I borrowed the title and stuck it into my Plagiarism poem. Begging forgiveness!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-01-30 01:15 AM

~V~
I have always enjoyed the way you take a subject, and make it come alive in your words....NICE

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-01-30 07:45 AM

M...ha..yes he forgot his darn hat

Madame..thank you so much..enjoyed writing it

midnitesun..you have eskimos ..we have cowboys ha.

Lauren..yes i like live cowboys ha

thanks lauren

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-01-30 10:39 AM

enjoyed

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

12 posted 2002-01-30 10:41 AM

Very nice romantic imagery!Enjoyed it!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2002-01-30 10:42 AM

enjoyed

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

14 posted 2002-01-30 10:46 AM

Wonderfully written.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

15 posted 2002-01-30 03:19 PM

vandana..thank you for peeking in

sodpossum..thank you..nice to hear from you

newell..thak you very much...glad you enjoyed

PearlsB4Swine
Member

since 2002-02-01

Posts 130
where the heart finds me

16 posted 2002-02-02 11:58 AM

What fun this was, Victoria!
Home home on the range (electric or gas??)

My guess is that he will return for a fresh plate very soon.

PB4S

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2002-02-02 02:15 PM

Vic...it is obvious that you are a Texas
lady...having been born there and raised
there for 18 years... YeeeeHaaaaaah...

Excellent poem...and I will take a slice
of that pie too...sounds yummmy...

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

18 posted 2002-02-02 04:05 PM

thank you barry but ive only lived in Texas for 10 years...i was raised back east..so no southern accent ha..one piece of pie coming right up

~Vic

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