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Fee
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0 posted 2002-02-01 11:30 PM


Another time another place
I heard the words I said
Destiny is out of our control
our paths already set

But spending time with you is easy
and the hours just slip away
I ache when we are parting
your eyes asking me to stay

Captured now beyond our control
our souls began to dance
I am not sure what to make of this
I guess its up to chance

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

© Copyright 2002 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-01 11:40 PM


"Captured now beyond our control
our souls began to dance
I am not sure what to make of this
I guess its up to chance"
Fiona, that is exactly how I feel lately.
Thank you for helping me clarify this.


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2 posted 2002-02-02 10:41 AM



Chance...fate...happenstance...

thank you!

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3 posted 2002-02-02 10:43 AM


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4 posted 2002-02-02 11:10 AM


But spending time with you is easy
and the hours just slip away
I ache when we are parting
your eyes asking me to stay

I decided to stay, and though chance played a role, it only offered the opportunity to explore, learn, and grow. Glad I chose to take chance up on its offer. Lovely writing Fee.

sodpossom
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5 posted 2002-02-02 12:29 PM


Sometimes you have to take chances.It might pay off and he might not.Thats a chance we have to take.Very nice!
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