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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-02-01 09:40 PM

Lost Soul Surroundings

I will never try
to make you understand
because I know there are too many sides
in this, the element of the soul
too short of a corner here
and a mirror from the circus
over there
making false images
as you turn that corner ‘round
and come crashing
to the ground

I can only hope you continue
to travel through this a-mazing soul
searching
because all you have looked for is right…
here…
and I wasn’t ready to give up
nor give flight just yet
unless you do…

regardless that you might want
to wing on alone
I will wing on then, too
albeit in another direction
knowing that I once had you
safe

even though you did not know
the elements of
this soul

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[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-02-2002 10:07 AM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-02-01 09:48 PM

Kari,
when you write you light the sky with your life yearnings. Beautiful!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-01 09:51 PM

(sigh) Such yearning fills your soft sincere words, sweet friend, I hope now you have found one that can understand the directions of your soul and now your search is complete with peace and joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2002-02-01 09:52 PM

Karilea--and so, I just understand. Hugs!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-02-01 10:03 PM

Karilea~This one is breathtaking! The entire piece flowed from line to line so beautifully. I love this! Thank you for a read that captured and hugged me tonight.
~Hugs to you too, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-02-01 10:24 PM

Sunshine, I could have written this, the sentiments are exactly what I have gone through..so heartfelt, so honest, you bare your soul. lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-02-01 11:28 PM

Sunshine - I only wish I had the words to write this. Wonderful poem you have written. Just so telling...

BC

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2002-02-02 12:30 PM

You are always amazing me, always throwing another glimpse of your sunshine onto these pages. I love this one, and shall save it to re-read again and again.

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

8 posted 2002-02-02 10:04 AM

I know this feeling Karilea
I lived it a few years with my first

Excellent Writing

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-02-02 10:09 AM

loved it

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