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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-01 05:24 PM

Written words etched into two hearts.
Said words echoing within both minds.
Shared feelings felt of two when one
Love free, living an endless dream.

Yes...I certainly will.
Why? I must...certainly that is..
For I vowed to...
I will..

Timeless walks across the dunes of time.
Love as shifting sands ever changing.
A fount of beauty gracing my eyes
as I drink of you, slate my thirst for you.

Why?
Why not?
Simply must be..
Forever..

A lingering kiss, eyes basking in the gleam.
The moon casting a shadow of two.
Fireflies spreading the passion of flames.
Moans echoing among the sighing trees

Always..
Ever always..
Eternal

Touched by a moment that lingers on.
Crimson fire flowing through hearts true.
Endless energy, the sun’s power captured.
A burning light, shining ever strong.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-02-01 05:35 PM

Fireflies spreading the passion of flames.
Moans echoing among the sighing trees
Youre on a roll ha..

~Victoria~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-02-01 07:17 PM

A lingering kiss, eyes basking in the gleam.
The moon casting a shadow of two.
Fireflies spreading the passion of flames.
Moans echoing among the sighing trees

How very romantic, Barry...it would be great on a valentine's card!

of course, the candy would have to go along with it too!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-02-01 07:19 PM

Timeless walks across the dunes of time.....Sigh, I love the image of this, and the way this all makes me feel....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-01 07:25 PM

"Always..
Ever always..
Eternal

Touched by a moment that lingers on.
Crimson fire flowing through hearts true.
Endless energy, the sun’s power captured.
A burning light, shining ever strong."

(sigh) Your words always bring a smile to my face and have me daydreaming of the most lovely visions, sweet friend, such love flows from your gentle heart that is bound to be eternal in meaning and trust! (big hugggssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-01 08:06 PM

A lingering kiss, eyes basking in the gleam.
The moon casting a shadow of two.
Fireflies spreading the passion of flames.
Moans echoing among the sighing trees

Always..
Ever always..
Eternal
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Love this Barry! YES! Enjoyed so much and love the presentation.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2002-02-01 08:11 PM

Magnus,
I felt the warmth and the softness reach out in caress...I could ask for nothing more except...keep doing what you're doing fair knight. For you do it well and do it right.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2002-02-01 08:54 PM

Hello Barry

This was absolutely stunning. Your words were overflowing with love and romance.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-02-01 09:09 PM

I like this very much, Magnus. The sound of a book being read, a voice echoing thoughts brought forth by the picture, the word, an answer here, a sharing there...

I like this very much...

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-02-01 09:15 PM

Magnus, this is one of your great one. exceptional. good warm feelings I felt. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

10 posted 2002-02-01 09:17 PM

I can feel your words as if they were a whisper in my ear.So gentle and kind.
Peaches

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

11 posted 2002-02-01 09:23 PM

Beautiful visions you give to me Barry!
well done sir

PearlsB4Swine
Member

since 2002-02-01

Posts 130
where the heart finds me

12 posted 2002-02-02 12:07 PM

rarely does a poem attempt to truly 'speak' directly to the reader, yet this does.

quite a nice job!

PB4S

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

13 posted 2002-02-03 08:01 PM

This would make a beautiful Valentine poem for someone, it's just lovely.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2002-02-03 08:06 PM

LOVED IT

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

15 posted 2002-02-04 04:59 AM

Simply beautiful

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

16 posted 2002-02-05 09:54 AM

1derful!
Eternal.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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