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On A Balmy Moonlit Night
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On A Balmy Moonlit Night |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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On a tropical night in Hawaii Is where you will find me I'll meet you underneath The swaying palm trees We'll watch the setting sun Like pure gold she will melt As the softness of your mouth Upon my lips will be felt In a hammock under the moonlight Is where we both shall lie As we search for constellations Up above in the starlit sky Here we'll lie for a while As we sway to and fro And we'll bask in the glory Of love's sweet afterglow Suetang |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Suetang, you have such perfect timing in your write Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy reading it  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...your poetry gets better by the day... This is a wonderfully romantic write... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this beautiful poem had me daydreaming of me and Joanna together on a Hawaiian beach under the stars, kissing each other under the swaying trees! (kiss on cheek) You always make me smile, sweet friend, this is a timeless classic of true love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
" In a hammock under the moonlight" Yes my kind of thinking, sue, lovely. floria Floria |
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