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the_NoMan
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It is of no significance.

0 posted 2002-02-01 03:34 PM


*Written in early 1997, when life could have been anything but worse.*


Blood drips to the floor,
In a constant stream,
I realize the mistake,
I was mad,
But is it worth this?
Are my scars so impressive?
Is this life so miserable?

You shant understand the warmth of a lovers heart lest you have felt the chill of anothers.

© Copyright 2002 C.B.S. - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2002-02-01 09:11 PM


Yes life is miserable but you found something to keep you here.
You've expressed yourself well. I enjoyed the read and could connect in many ways.

Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

~AF~

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
2 posted 2002-02-01 09:15 PM


yes thanks for sharing your sorrow. This gives you reason to express yourself.


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3 posted 2002-02-01 09:56 PM




(big hugggssssss) Soooooooo very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now you have healed these years and now live with hope and promise for a brand new day! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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