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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2002-02-02 07:31 PM

ImmortalSoul

Immortal soul, in all of time
one fleeting moment have you dwelt
within this aging breast of mine
with all the sorrows it has felt

Now fly away and take your leave
for I’ll not go along with you
To dust I’ll turn ’neath autumn leaf
below the wet of morning dew

To heaven you will swiftly sail
The moons and stars to light your face
You’ll travel on a moonbeam’s tail
And fly the sky at moonbeams’ pace

Farewell, my friend, life taught us love
Perhaps you will return again
To dwell within the hollows of
Another tender poet’s pen

Immortal soul, fly up, be gone!
The time has come for us to part
Now take with you to heaven’s throng
The love within this broken heart

Elizabeth Santos

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-02-02 07:34 PM

Elizabeth, I have got goose bumps from the top of my head to the bottom of my toes..Oh my, how very very intense this is. I love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-02-02 07:46 PM

Wow! Elizabeth, I am mesmerized by your writing, here. This is brilliantly beautiful.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-02-02 08:03 PM

Ah Lady Santos, don't you sing for every poet then... another exceptional piece...from one I admire greatly... write on!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-02 08:37 PM

(big hugggssssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now your heart has been touched again by a love, only this time one that shines like gold and fills you with such glee and tenderness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always delight my day! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2002-02-03 01:21 AM

Have to agree with Karilea, I have grown to expect only the best from your pen, and I am never dissapointed, never! This was fantastic writing of a very painful subject.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

6 posted 2002-02-03 02:28 AM

A great write from a great poetess.
peaches

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

7 posted 2002-02-03 03:00 AM

Elizabeth, you wrote this so well... as always.. your ability to put emotions into words is simply ... awesome

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-02-04 09:05 AM

Excruciatingly beautiful.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2002-02-04 09:09 AM

*sigh* I hope your immortal soul stays within your heart so that we can forever be blessed by the talent and beauty that flows from your pen...This poem is absolutely stunning. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2002-02-04 10:30 AM

oh, how well you share beauty with us...

regards to you,
sudhir

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

11 posted 2002-02-04 12:13 PM

Your comments are so much appreciated, Thank you all for reading
Liz

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2002-02-05 05:13 PM

LizzieLady~

'Farewell, my friend, life taught us love
Perhaps you will return again
To dwell within the hollows of
Another tender poet’s pen'

Such lovely, lovely thoughts~
You pen so gracefully~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-02-05 08:47 PM

Powerful, and well done, Elizabeth.
Sandra

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

14 posted 2002-02-06 09:42 AM

WOW! Very nicely done Elizabeth....what a treat to read!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

15 posted 2002-02-06 12:37 PM

another inspirational write from you, I am always in awe of your talent and generous spirit in sharing your poetry.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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