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Jasmine Embers |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Memories have become smoke in my eyes smoke in the hand mirror of the winds drifting like heart-shaped leaves on a tree burning into jasmine embers of thee sweet fragrance of our love softly lingers upon dormant branches of eternity as long as a willow has faithful roots memories will grow deeply within if you do not return like a butterfly it does not mean our love did not exist once danced upon the smile of my heart sweet as jasmine embers in my eyes upon weeping willows are stars' midnight blue still spellbound, whenever i think of you You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-02-2002 10:02 AM).] |
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the_NoMan New Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 6It is of no significance. |
One word will have to do the justice here. Beautiful. You shant understand the warmth of a lovers heart lest you have felt the chill of anothers. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ah! Vic, your poetry is divine. I love the way your words reach down and get right into the depths of my heart.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vic, you never stop writing such beautifully romantic thoughts...included your use of objects as part of the theme...I envy this part of your poetry... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Everything is always so colorful in your poems. How do you do that? This is the line that struck me hardest "if you do not return like a butterfly it does not mean our love did not exist" I know that we understand eachother on that subject. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you the_noman..im glad you enjoyed thank you newell..thank you very much its nice to know when i touch someones heart barry..thank you..hey just a little imagination thats all it takes..pleased you enjoy my poems sandra..  thank you dear one |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
spellbound, whenever i think of you'' ~V~ Ohhhh I love that..sigh.... HUGSLauren~ Step through the |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) WOW!!! Oh my gosh, your imagery always amazes me and inspires me, the beauty of memories and the fireflies of true love shine from your golden heart, may these jasmine embers forever bring light to you everyday just as the future will fill ribbons of sunshine in your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lauren..thank you again for your lovely comments..always enjoy hearing from you noah..what would i do without you sweetie hugss |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, you always, always reach deep into my core and touch me with your words. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Such imagery...unforgettable  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Victoria A stunning picture you have painted here. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
kethy..thank you very much..so nice of you to say..im glad you enjoyed madame..thank you for peeking in tonight sue.. thank you sue..glad you enjoyed my words |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
so sweet are your words so natural are the bonds of phrases enthralling |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Lovely! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Victoria,stunning images and wonderfully written.  Juanita |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
pearlsb4swine thank you and welcome to passions Hi eddie..thank you for peeking in juanita..thanks so much |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Lovely thoughts Victoria and so true when one daydreams |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Rex..glad you enjoyed..thank you for peeking in today ~Victoria~ |
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