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Poetry Flows........ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Poetry flows With one look in your eyes Love spills onto these pages Unable to disguise My heart on display In words of rhyme Telling of this love Yours for all time Rhythm of syllables Meter, rise and fall Volumes of emotion Whispers of my enthrall Sentiments in waves On my heart’s seashore Lighthouse spotlighting The one I adore ~SEA~ with all that you are... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
lights shines upon brow I must dock the ship quickly my SEA is waiting Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, SEA! Lovely, indeed! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is sooooooooo beautiful, love poetry flows from your lips! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-01-2002 01:28 PM).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, This is absolutely lovely, my friend. I enjoyed every word. (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What don't I like about this one!? You're on a roll little one...keep it up! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You write a gorgeous love poem. And the photo is amazing. Sandra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, fabulous write. Welcome back. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl this is just sooooooooo wonderful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is utterly utterly fabulous. You’ve written a poem that is absolutely fabulous ONE of your utter utter best and it is as wonderful as you are because YOU are indeed truly wonderful You know that this is utterly fabulous don’t you, the flow is just perfect And you know that I love it right? This goes straight into my library thank you for this beauty darling girl Truly sensational writing, As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoys |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...beautiful...and you have captured all of those things you so much enjoy within this poem.... |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Have you stood there when love just flows across the bay? I'm sure that you have, from this poem, thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper, Your SEA awaits you Come to where sand and shore meet As waves of love greet  Denise, Thank you very much! Noah, as are you dear one, thank you Michael, Thank you, I’m so glad you enjoyed (((hugs))) Sunshine, Thank you for your praise  Sandra, I have waited a long time for a poem to go with that Picture, I love it….thank you Kethry, Thank you, life keeps me hopping sometimes LOL Mushy, You are so wonderful, thank you Vandana, Always happy to see your Enjoy Magnus, Thanks, the only thing left out was the rain  Romeo, Yes, I have, and I have felt it brush across my soul, thank you very much |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - soft is the write of your romantic muse. Lovely this is... BC |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
in a simplicity lies truth of feeling in your poem we find the peace in wonderful words PB4S |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My heart on display In words of rhyme Telling of this love Yours for all time Rhythm of syllables Meter, rise and fall Volumes of emotion Whispers of my enthrall ======================================== you know I LOVE this one  We wish ourselves beautiful ... |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very lovely write and picture.Enjoyed it! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
How beautifully you write about the sea, SEA.  the words describe the picture so perfectly Sentiments in waves On my heart’s seashore Lighthouse spotlighting The one I adore copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Keep them flowing Sea...James |
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