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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2002-02-01 10:36 AM




Gentle kisses on fingers
bold look in his eye
he bid her good morning
she replied in soft sigh

Always a gentlemen
gracious and kind
devilishly handsome
with such a clever mind

The only man in this world
to steal her heart away
every time he spoke to her
she felt her heart catch, fall, allay

Privately on parchment
pale blue ink in quill
she would pen her heart
hoping to finally still

Yet each sunrise with greeting
his soft morning hello
her heart would whisper
I love you more than you’ll ever know…..


~SEA~


with all that you are...
with all that you know...
love......

© Copyright 2002 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
vandana
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1 posted 2002-02-01 10:45 AM


enjoy
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2 posted 2002-02-01 10:50 AM


Hey, where did you get that picture of me sleeping   This is lovely, Susan, very romantic.  Well, my time is up, I promised myself 30 minutes on the computer a day back to reality.  I could read poetry all day.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



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3 posted 2002-02-01 11:31 AM


This is beautiful SEA and very romantic.
The picture was perfect!  I hope he knows how much he is loved.

But you know,  some men just don't get it!  

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-02-01 11:44 AM


What a lucky guy, and what a lucky gal you are, too

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2002-02-01 11:44 AM


well done
ms SEA
lady dances
with words
her mind plays
the music

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6 posted 2002-02-01 12:24 PM


SEA,
This man gets it! Nice write.

Startime
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7 posted 2002-02-01 12:27 PM


*sigh* how beautifully romantic....I love it..He is very lucky to be the one to make you sigh. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-02-01 12:46 PM


Susan, love reading between the lines here.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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9 posted 2002-02-01 12:51 PM


And to always remember, one freezes time.

Poetically graceful, thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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10 posted 2002-02-01 01:35 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, this brought tears to my eyes to feel the happiness in your heart and how he makes your heart smile! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet freind, I'm adding this to my library! We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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11 posted 2002-02-01 01:36 PM


Goodness, but you are the romantic.  I'm keeping this one. (((hugs)))

me

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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12 posted 2002-02-01 09:20 PM



You go away for a few days, and come back, sssssmmmmokin'....

Kethry
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13 posted 2002-02-01 09:52 PM


SEA,
where have you been?
I've missed your writes of delight
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



JamesMichael
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14 posted 2002-02-01 10:14 PM


Romantically desirable...James
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15 posted 2002-02-01 11:40 PM


So very romantic, Sue...

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

SEA
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Thank you all very much, your kind words mean the world to me
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