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Rub Me |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Rub Me a heart is made of the finest crystal the kind you have to hold but can quickly lose its luster sat upon the shelf of behold you can rub it with soft words but touch is all it can feel action of the proof of your love the only way it is real it makes a special shine and it doesn’t take too much and will only glisten in the hands of a tender touch "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
1slick lady, Nice write. Just so you don't get rubbed the wrong way.  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* to be touched by the hand of love...this is so beautiful that it shines pure like the crystal that awaits the tender touch. Beautiful. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
your heart is gleaming with glitter dear lady! I like this a lot |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Pardon me while I dust myself off!  Your work shines, lady. I see great use of metaphor and much thought in the construction of your poetry these days... enjoying it much! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very well done. One of your very best works Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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