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Open Poetry #18

You Are My Light (Everything I See)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-02-01 10:41 AM

You are my light,
You are my night,
you are my eyes,
That I see through
In you,
You are my light
(Everything I see)
In you
You are my light
That I see you
In morning light
The light I see
through,
Through I see you,
Shinning star,
That shines my eyes brightly
You are my light
(Everything I see)
I see you,
The sun and the moon,
You are my reason
I live
You are my heart
I give,
You are all my I give
You are my stars
The shine upon my eyes
You are my light
That I see throught
You are my light
(Everything That I see)
I see It In your eyes

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-01 10:50 AM

Vandana, this is beautiful! It reads like a song

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2002-02-01 10:51 AM

it does read like a song, Vandana, very nice.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-02-01 11:01 AM

vandana - I have to agree, it's like a song. All is needed is the music...

BC

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-02-01 12:40 PM

This surely is a beautiful gem!
ENJOYED

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-02-01 02:00 PM

A beautiful love story Vandana, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-02-01 02:07 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romnantic, sweet friend, may your love always be the shining star of your heart just as you will always be when he looks into your eyes! (kiss on cheek) You are a true delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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