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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-01-29 09:17 PM

Sonnet I

To grasp, without entangling, a string
To cache lines, a beam of light to bring
To you, here, and in this now of moment
For calm are thoughts by you so solemn sent

A calm marooned, warmth of soul, lonely sigh
Lies within scattered thoughts of you and I
Serene, seen upon scene of yet to come
Believing to know that you are The One

To see in shadows mist of waning night
To what will be gleaned come swift morning’s light
A belief true in this the you of me
To hear my name on your lips, for you see…

To hold as token, cachet of belief
One day to breath again, sweet, sweet relief

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
01.28.01
revised 01.29.02

Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-29 09:49 PM

*sigh* a sonnet the rings with a tender loving touch given from passions lips...I love the way this sonnet feels. Very well done. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-29 09:53 PM

Karilea! This is beautifully penned. I really enjoyed this one tonight. Wish I could write a sonnet. Perhaps one day I will give it a go. Well done!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-29 09:59 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love it, sweet freind, you write sonnets sooooooo beautifully, I can't wait to see many more lovely ones from your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true gem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-29 10:09 PM

Karilea, this is a very, very beautiful sonnet. By the way, my posting of a funny sonnet was in no way related to your priceless treasure. Forgive me.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-01-29 10:14 PM

This whole thing is beautiful, but those last two lines are real heart stealers. Always enjoyed.
Sandra

brianbeaudry
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6 posted 2002-01-29 10:16 PM

Wonderful sonnet Sunshine!!!!Craftily penned!!!

jennirey
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7 posted 2002-01-29 10:22 PM

And Breath you shall.. very very nice.

Jen

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2002-01-30 07:59 AM

To grasp, without entangling, a string
To cache lines, a beam of light to bring
To you, here, and in this now of moment
For calm are thoughts by you so solemn sent

A calm marooned, warmth of soul, lonely sigh
Lies within scattered thoughts of you and I
Serene, seen upon scene of yet to come
Believing to know that you are The One
===========================================

Well this is oh so lovely....
I do so enjoy being sonnetized in the Sunshine

This is a beautiful write K, and the vocabulary is unique, clever and creative, as is the inner rhyme you laced thru it...both of which made this sonnet even more impressive.

sodpossom
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N.C

9 posted 2002-01-30 11:12 AM

Very beautiful!

Martie

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10 posted 2002-01-30 12:27 PM

Karilea--Beautiful in thought and form..just like you!

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2002-01-30 01:33 PM

This is just so gorgeous! And, of course it's going right into my library!

I think that it's time to add your name to the list of the queens of sonnets!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

12 posted 2002-01-30 01:39 PM

a cachet of belief~~

What a nice thought that is.
So much love to be desired in this!

Very pretty~

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

13 posted 2002-01-30 03:55 PM

'tis necessary
this breathing in of freedom
the air is so clean

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus

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Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-01-30 04:06 PM

Is the day that takes away night
Is the moon that bathes the view
Is the words sounding so right
Is simply beautiful, is true...

Nice poem Kari...very nice...yep it is..

strbbux
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15 posted 2002-01-30 05:29 PM

Very beautiful sonnet Sunshine, really enjoyed it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Nan

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16 posted 2002-02-01 07:36 AM

This is lovely - Full of Sunshine's heart... Working on the structure here...

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

17 posted 2002-02-01 01:57 PM

Such a sweet longing and so much promise. This is quite lovely, Karilea.

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