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Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2002-01-31 07:06 PM

Love are wine
it tickles my mind
And I'm
Always got drunk
Evertime
On love
Oh how life fizzes
In fact
The whole world is
Real good
When it whizzes
Along
On love

Ladies is grapes
I are feet
When togathered
We're complete
We make wine
The sweet kind
And it feels
So fine
Just to get
Stoneblind
On love

Pretty love
Turtle dove
I'm thinking of
Lovely love
The kind you shove
Up your soul
And feel a whole
Lot like
Red roses
Look

Love are wine
Love are fun
Love Poem
Number One

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-31 07:09 PM

(smiles) WOW!!! YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful love poem from your golden heart that fizzles with eternal wine of joy! (big hugggssssssss) I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-31 07:43 PM

I can't resist a love poem for very long...I really like the way you brought this poem together to say "love poem number one" **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-31 07:45 PM

Toerag, so very very unique, nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2002-01-31 10:55 PM

Toerag,

this poem are fine,
yes it are,
your'e right 'bout posies
and womans wine!

But I's miss your'e picshure
that ones wit your'e tow
rapt in a wrag
now dats luv for shore!

Da Cor

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-01-31 11:16 PM

oh how very pretty! When will we see Love poem number two?

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

6 posted 2002-02-01 02:12 PM

Toe - You left off the last verse (heh)

Love are me
Love are ewe
I'm sheepish, Dear
We are through.
I wish Long John
Would help me write
Cuz he's a poet
Who does things right.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2002-02-01 05:57 PM

Here we go again....

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2002-02-01 06:23 PM

I had to read this twice. It dances!

Nan

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