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Toerag
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0 posted 2002-01-31 07:06 PM


Love are wine
it tickles my mind
And I'm
Always got drunk
Evertime
On love
Oh how life fizzes
In fact
The whole world is
Real good
When it whizzes
Along
On love

Ladies is grapes
I are feet
When togathered
We're complete
We make wine
The sweet kind
And it feels
So fine
Just to get
Stoneblind
On love

Pretty love
Turtle dove
I'm thinking of
Lovely love
The kind you shove
Up your soul
And feel a whole
Lot like
Red roses
Look

Love are wine
Love are fun
Love Poem
Number One


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1 posted 2002-01-31 07:09 PM




(smiles) WOW!!! YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful love poem from your golden heart that fizzles with eternal wine of joy! (big hugggssssssss) I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-31 07:43 PM


I can't resist a love poem for very long...I really like the way you brought this poem together to say "love poem number one" **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
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3 posted 2002-01-31 07:45 PM


Toerag, so very very unique, nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Corinne
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4 posted 2002-01-31 10:55 PM


Toerag,

this poem are fine,
yes it are,
your'e right 'bout posies
and womans wine!

But I's miss your'e picshure
that ones wit your'e tow
rapt in a wrag
now dats luv for shore!

Da Cor

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5 posted 2002-01-31 11:16 PM


oh how very pretty! When will we see Love poem number two?
LngJhnAg
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6 posted 2002-02-01 02:12 PM


Toe - You left off the last verse (heh)

Love are me
Love are ewe
I'm sheepish, Dear
We are through.
I wish Long John
Would help me write
Cuz he's a poet
Who does things right.

Nan
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7 posted 2002-02-01 05:57 PM


Here we go again....
Pilgrimage
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8 posted 2002-02-01 06:23 PM


I had to read this twice. It dances!

Nan

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