Remnants of Effects Of Going Home

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-01-31 05:41 PM

In this southern place
further north than my adult home
the splendor of true home
chants at me through wintered trees.
The old life pulsates thorugh changed air
and it breathes on me like a ghost
waiting to return and live.
So sad, the call of youth
when it knows that death is near.
Sunlight through a glass door
picture paints a faint smile on my aging face
and my joy is brought in delectable pieces,
rationed out now as if I will one day
be the hollow warehouse
that held the beauty and pricelesness
of dancing and talking with the wind.
As the wind played hide and seek in the boughs of pines
still in their childhood as I was,
I sant, wrote, played, and ran
through the simplicity of simple joy.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-01-31 05:47 PM

i really like this alot ...nicely done hon hugss

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-01-31 06:01 PM

I love your work so much! Thank you for sharing this!

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Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

3 posted 2002-01-31 06:04 PM

Going home always does this to one. But remember, home is always close, even when we are far.

I always enjoy reading your work, it speaks to my very heart. Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-31 06:49 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the beauty of innocence shines in your gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) May the spirit of the child forever sing deep in your heart and from your throat may you always share your songs of love to us all! We all love you so much, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

5 posted 2002-01-31 06:51 PM

Very beautiful and deep!Very nice job!

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-31 07:51 PM

I thought of the simple joys of childhood with this, great write, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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