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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-31 04:21 PM

Dark Caress

Velvet soft is his touch
as it lingers on my lips
Tender sweet is his kiss
when he from nectar sips

A blazing fire he starts
on white skin now blushed red
Two hearts with frantic beats
lead us to what’s ahead

I beg him not to stop
of that I do confess
I lean into his hand,
lost in his dark caress

The dance of love begins
each step takes us higher
Embraced in passions arms,
giving in to love’s desire

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-01-31 04:27 PM

What a night! Not sure what's dark about it, though. Sounded perfectly romantic to me.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-31 04:30 PM

Oh Karen! This is sensually lovely....
"I beg him not to stop
of that I do confess
I lean into his hand,
lost in his dark caress"
Gee.....makes me ache with...oh you know!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-01-31 04:30 PM

Startime,
pretty desirable write here. Now I need a glass of water or a cold shower or something.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

4 posted 2002-01-31 04:40 PM

Karen,one word for your very romantic poem!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-01-31 08:03 PM

Karen...this poem GLOWS with sensuality.
Great job!

Its on fire!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-31 09:27 PM

Karen...you are flowing in romance and love
this evening...very enjoyable writes...
you are the queen of romance..most certainly.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-01-31 10:01 PM

a favorite now I love this one..library shelf it goes *s
hugsssss
M

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

8 posted 2002-01-31 10:44 PM

Startime,
Beautifully written.

"The dance of love begins
each step takes us higher"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

9 posted 2002-01-31 10:50 PM

Startime, I agree with Duncan. There is nothing dark, here. Only bursting star light.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-02-01 08:58 AM

Karen very descriptive and lovely. I love this verse.
"The dance of love begins
each step takes us higher
Embraced in passions arms,
giving in to love’s desire"

So wonderful, I think "Caress of Fire"

nothing dark here.
floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

[This message has been edited by strbbux (02-01-2002 08:59 AM).]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-02-01 10:24 AM

enjoyed

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-02-01 05:17 PM

Very steamy. The title makes me think of one of Ann Rice's vampires.
Sandra

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

13 posted 2002-02-01 05:39 PM

Oh my, this makes the dark a wonderful place to be.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2002-02-01 07:25 PM

Karen~

If I just

S I G H E D

would that be ok??? LOVELY....HUGS

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-01-2002 07:26 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2002-02-01 10:11 PM

Lovely...one of my favorites Startime...James

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

16 posted 2002-02-04 01:46 PM

I'd ask for the next dance but I left my asbestos underwear at the cleaners

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

17 posted 2002-02-04 02:47 PM

yes.. oh yes.. this is how it can be..

what dark??

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

18 posted 2002-02-04 09:32 PM

Karen - I love dark nights, but with moonbeams coming down. Romantic write, nicely done....

BC

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