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Shangri-la of Your Smile
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Shangri-la of Your Smile |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The Shangri-la of your smile warms like a summer breeze upon islands of no return bronze bodies sway in rum swizzle winds as steel drums play beneath emerald fans of Calypso palms soft pearly sands entice bare toes wiggling them, Cha Cha Cha as Bermudian winds blow sweet harmony of turquoise waters and whispering seashells Shangri-la of your smile transports me to paradise for a while You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-02-2002 10:04 AM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* magical...simply magical...thank you for the stunning vision you gave me with the reading of this poem. It flowed softly and put a smile on my face. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your smile sare always contagious in your lovely words for you are sunshine to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you karen  thank you noah |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes! That is the best idea yet. Nothing like a steel band and dancing under the palm trees (Or so I would imagine, as I have never been able to find someone to do this with) Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
All that, hidden in the Himalayas. Imagine that Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sandra..you are too funny  interloper...thanks..if youre with the right person you can find it in your own backyard  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Ok, fess up Victoria, where do you get your great ideas. LOl, I love this, floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful poem, Victoria...it literally transported me to a tropical beach on this snowy winter day.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you floria...well being in Bermuda about 25 yrs ago i still remember how lovely it was..and how good the rum swizzles were..ha.. thank you Madame..yes it is a snowy day here too in texas too..nice to hear from you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I want to go to paradise too...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
you are in paradise...i love hawaii but i thought bermuda would make a good poem at the time..ha..thank you dear james hugss Thank you Nancy..palm trees do sound nice about now...our snow is melting, and very wet outside.. thanks for visiting hon.. hugss Larry...Does that mean you like the poem? ha..[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-01-2002 11:41 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee Victoria, your poem almost made yesterday's ice storm seem like a distant memory! Enjoyed this sudden warm-up greatly. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Victoria, Take me with you! Please!  |
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