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Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

0 posted 2002-01-31 02:54 PM

To Kiss a Friend

Stray strands of hair between her lips,
I brushed aside with fingertips.
No words were spoken, eyes said much.
She longed for a more tender touch.

I kissed her deeply, felt her tense.
This really did not make much sense,
for we were friends, this wasn’t right,
but even so, I pulled her tight.

A journey of discovery,
of what, through touch, our hands might see.
She whispered words I’ll not forget.
She said, “I do not feel regret.”

Our friendship, closer than before.
Each day I find I love her more.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-31 02:57 PM

Well...I have heard

that friends make the best lovers...it is good to be friends first...I hope your love for her continues to grow with each kiss. I love the feel of this poem. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-31 03:30 PM

Oh Michael I love this! I too believe that you should start out as friends first and then see where it goes from there....from the sounds of this kiss, things are going uphill from here!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

3 posted 2002-01-31 03:37 PM

Michael,what a wonderful poem about two friends falling in love.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

[This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (01-31-2002 03:39 PM).]

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-01-31 06:16 PM

What a nice thought, Michael. And you wrote it beautifully.
Sandra

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-01-31 06:23 PM

1derful write my friend! I loved it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-01-31 07:02 PM

(smiles) Oooohhhhhhh...you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, oh my gosh, I also hope this all works out for you and your heart will only grow in eternal love with her. Until then, may your friendship forever sing on! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

7 posted 2002-01-31 07:08 PM

Very beautiful write!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-01-31 08:01 PM

A romance in the making, nice Auguste, very nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Martie

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California

9 posted 2002-02-01 11:38 AM

Michael:

A kiss can make a powerful connection between two people who already love. Enjoyed your poem, my friend.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2002-02-02 07:11 PM

Everyone, thank you for your kind replies, but the poem is only fantasy.

Or is it? LOL!

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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