Open Poetry #18 |
A Moments Whisper |
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
trying a little romance again. A Moments Whisper Beneath a delicate dream, Like a symphony of rain, Moments of tender love, Together under the summer moon, As the vision of his handsome face, Is flooding my sleep, I lie in loves garden. Floria |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
What a garden of romance you've grown! Applause to you, Floria! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
What a wonderful, wonderful place to lie! Gazing at all God's wondrous Creation! Very beautiful, dear floria. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Floria,I couldn`t find you a garden for your beautiful poem.I`m sending you two flowers in love. Juanita |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely images floria dear..nicely done hugss ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You do romance, very well,Floria... I loved this one. You have beautiful flowers of love in your garden...you must have a green thumb! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you plant romantic gardens with such beauty....I love this ...more please. You are very very good at romance you know. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Duncan, thank you so much for your kindness. floria Newell, thank you so much for your inspirational reply. floria Juanita, the two flowers in love were adorable. thank you for inspiring me, floria Victoria, you inspire me thank you, floria Lyra thank you for your kindness,,,you always inspire me. floria Startime,,,well you and magnus got me started , hehehe, you also inspire me much. thanks, floria Floria "Alas for those that never sing, But die with all their music in them" (Oliver Wendell Holmes) [This message has been edited by strbbux (02-01-2002 08:55 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I lie in love's garden such a place does exist suspended there under wing of a morning heaven enjoyed this one much Floria |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Floria, This one is a symphony of tenderness. Very nice. Nan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you write the words of a true romantic and I just know he will always sigh to the words from the garden of your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true gem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-31-2002 07:20 PM).] |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very beautiful images!Lovely write! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Dark Stranger, thank you so much for your kindness, I love your lines here, wonderful reply thank you.floria Nan, thank you so much, floria Thank You Noah , so much for your response. floria thank you sodpossom, for your kindness. floria Floria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Lovely! Keep these great poems coming |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
strbbux - m'mmmmmm, liked this... BC |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Rose petal, floria Thank you Bill, floria Floria |
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