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Taken From Time
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Taken From Time |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Taken From Time Feeling ever so weakened, a need arising to seize, the me that once was there before the dark began its tease. A trip now in the offing, beyond the anchored ground. Taken from time, my life in route, in need of comfort bound. Messages inside my head, conflict in silent hold. Contest now is over, in battle, lost my soul. No words could ever rest in peace the struggle from within. Removal of the mind and heart, only miles away to win. To capture once that part of me naive, from sin, desires, And build upon the newness then, until my dark expires. When light begins its reaching out to hold and guide me straight, 'Til next time when I'm taken in, no falsehoods to translate. My life in keep will then release, the door will lock the old, And nevermore, as Poe would say, will you be in my hold. Erased right now, I've cleared all roads departure, taking leave, From deviance, behavior yours, the webbing of, the weave. Only forty-five, it took, no more, no less, it seems, To take away the "once upons" that dormant lay in dreams. No messages, none to relay a farewell, this shall be. I've been taken from time, too long, now it's ticking just for me. * I read the "Taken From Time" in a response somewhere.. can't recall where this morning but wish to thank the writer for the inspiration... "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
and you have created an exceptional and inspired write... much enjoyed... regards, sudhir |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
And i hope you have a wonderful time M..hugss.. will miss you  ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like this Maureen, where are you going? Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Bon Voyage, Maureen...I hope you come back soon. I loved the poem!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! I am so glad you were inspired to write this poem...it is absolutely magnificent...There is almost a feeling of freedom within your words.. Well done. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sudhir...thank you I appreciate the kind words from an exceptional poet as yourself *s Victoria...I will at least have a chance to regain my composure...and have some time for enjoyment, I am sure *s I will miss you too ~V..I would still rather be in Vegas. Sandra...Down South I guess is as good as anywhere... unless I change my mind and come to NH. *s Lyra...I am pleased you enjoyed the poem..it was cathartic for me.. Thank you Karen...yes, finally I do feel free...thank you for the hugssssssss Maureen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Every moment in my life has taught me something both good and bad about myself, all we can do is use the ones we have and know no battle is ever truly lost, as long as we are trying. (((((((((((hug))))))))))))) Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such grace and freedom fills your words, this is wonderful! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are always a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Have a very enjoyable trip!Very nice poem! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kay, I've done it..first time ever spur of the moment..I am going to fly away on Saturday...I will miss you, be thinking about you...so remember to keep smiling...and I will be in touch if I ever come back (*teasin' ya....when I return *s) Noah...sometimes I think you are just too too nice my friend hugssss M sodpossom ..I shall have a wonderful relaxing trip...won't think about anyone or anything...for a change *s thank you M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-31-2002 09:00 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Naked thoughts, I could hear the clock ticking in this...so it must be time for a change. *HuGS* come back soon. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - a time away will do wonders for you. Peace walk with you my friend... BC |
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