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Memories...... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 She touched the photograph Of the one she had loved Smiling through tears Remembering came in waves Flashing, slashing Through her soul Till she thought she’d bleed Memories….. ~SEA~ with all that you are... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) So very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, may her heart beat once more with loves happiness and amy she smile over infinite memories of true happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are true gems to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, This touches so close to home, sweet friend. Thank you for this. Thank you much! (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
hard to give up those cherished memories, I am touched by this |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Some memories bring both pain and pleasure, it just happens that way, least we ever forget. Oh SEA, oh hugs~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Where the heck have you been? Susan This is an incredibly strong moment you've captured. I love moments. The brevity is so striking. BTW...I'm fine. Just had a bit of a moment, myself. Lost loves make for great poetry, don't they? Well, at least you got a story out of it! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ When you put your heart into it ... no one does it better~ You 'knew' I'd be touched by this one ... and I am~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful-- for he or she There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah, always so sweet to me, thank you Michael, I hope it touched gently, thank you(((hugs))) Ecrivan, I couldn’t even if I tried…..and believe me, I’ve tried….thank you Bluesy, yes, they do….I really wouldn’t have it any other way….thank you Cowboy, I have been overwhelmingly busy….LOL….yeah, lost loves tend to stick around the heart, never really letting go, or is it that we hold on??? (I’m glad you are ok, but the lots of hugs still stands….  Marge, high praise from you, thank you so much |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
being sneaky there Jamie....thank you, and it's a "he" |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Excellent short poem. Very skillfully crafted...saying so much in its brevity. ***Ivy Rose |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I’ve had moments like these Sea…I think we all have. The memories live on…but, when we’re ready, they do fade...until we can smile without the tears. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, you know how to pull at the heart strings, don't you? A beautiful write. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - remembering of those memories, hurtful or happy, but still those memories haunt... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely write and picture..I think it's that we hold on..maybe at least until another memory greater in strength can takes it's place... nice to see your return hugsss M |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Incredibly powerful imagery Susan ... an excellent write indeed! Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Powerful and beautifully sad!Very nice! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Bleeding memories,, oh such strong words, great poem. floria Floria |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
as always knowing how to touch my heart with your writings Susan. Think many can relate, thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Susan, I've missed you! I'm having one of those moments now after reading this....thank you. ~Hugs, tears and smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ah Sea, don't we know this feeling very well...lovely, my dear... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a lovely tearful poem, Sue  It reminds me so much of the time right after my first husband died. I would sleep with his picture and talk to it. I even got a special frame from Radio Shack. Its a talking picture frame and I recorded his answering machine message from work onto it...so, I would pretend he was answering me. Everyone thought I was crazy. I was just grieving.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such sadness and pain fill this poem...My heart goes out to you...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sea, You are an incredible poet. This touched my heart beautifully. You are an angel. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A spark within a cell of the mind of a love that we once could find A joy of the feeling of an embrace as love does so softly kiss a face. Welcome back Sue...Have been missing your beautiful words... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan--You just hit the mark with this poem..touch the heart and gone. Very well done! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, I've read the 6 times. Had more then one memory it brings to mind. A very powerful piece. Thank you so much. It's a keeper picture and all as it is so touching![This message has been edited by Larry C (02-01-2002 12:19 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Till she thought she’d bleed Memories….." I love this one. Both the picture and the poem speak volumes about lost love moments. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Till she thought she’d bleed Memories….. Still getting off on your moment. Thought it worth another reply. I just love this line. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sea Such a powerful connection between the words and the picture. Skillful writing....beautiful depth and insightfulness! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Such power and emotion, so well expressed. We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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