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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-01-30 11:58 PM



Quiet in the night
you breathe and the air
is filled with your essence.
One touch shivers through time,
cries out for more of you.
My voice aglow as it sings
your name into praises.
Adornments of love
creating a match
of this rare, fathomless,
melding of two souls.Hear
the anguish of those lost
with no moon in sight; then
listen to the contented sound
of your own breathing.
For your breath has raised up
the moon within my soul.
And, you are the only one
who has captured
the heart of this shy moon.

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-31 12:14 PM


"listen to the contented sound
of your own breathing.
For your breath has raised up
the moon within my soul.
And, you are the only one
who has captured
the heart of this shy moon."


this is completely gorgeous!!!

very well done!!

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2 posted 2002-01-31 12:38 PM


ooh soo soft and heavenly.
I'm going to tell Noah to read this, He will LOVE IT!

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3 posted 2002-01-31 12:49 PM


IvyRose~

I loved these lines~

'For your breath has raised up
the moon within my soul.
And, you are the only one
who has captured
the heart of this shy moon.'


Delicately penned~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-01-31 01:59 AM


Ivy Rose - very warm writing, and very soft you write this...

BC

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5 posted 2002-01-31 04:52 AM


I really enjoyed this
arthur

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2002-01-31 06:04 AM


For your breath has raised up
the moon within my soul.
And, you are the only one
who has captured
the heart of this shy moon.

beautiful..I see the same words have captured others   *s

M


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7 posted 2002-01-31 01:44 PM


Soooo romantic and lovely Ivy, I love this one, floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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8 posted 2002-01-31 03:03 PM


*sigh* filled with all the soft moonlit romance that glows within your heart. This is so beautiful, Ivy...the feeling of it was of contentment with love. I love it. **big hugs** I hope this means that love again fills the moon of your heart.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2002-01-31 04:37 PM


*sigh* how lovely and so romantic penned...enjoyed every line...

Charisma

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10 posted 2002-01-31 04:40 PM


Dear Ivy Rose,
This is so pretty, and the images in it are so clear I can see them. Good writing.

Nan

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11 posted 2002-01-31 05:07 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words you always create! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may the moon always shine in your heart and guide you with a warm loving face of your love forever! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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12 posted 2002-01-31 05:46 PM


"Adornments of love
creating a match
of this rare, fathomless,
melding of two souls."


I love it! It struck a chord in me or somthing... thanks for sharing!

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