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Shy Moon
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Shy Moon |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Quiet in the night you breathe and the air is filled with your essence. One touch shivers through time, cries out for more of you. My voice aglow as it sings your name into praises. Adornments of love creating a match of this rare, fathomless, melding of two souls.Hear the anguish of those lost with no moon in sight; then listen to the contented sound of your own breathing. For your breath has raised up the moon within my soul. And, you are the only one who has captured the heart of this shy moon. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"listen to the contented sound of your own breathing. For your breath has raised up the moon within my soul. And, you are the only one who has captured the heart of this shy moon." this is completely gorgeous!!! very well done!!  |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ooh soo soft and heavenly. I'm going to tell Noah to read this, He will LOVE IT! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ I loved these lines~ 'For your breath has raised up the moon within my soul. And, you are the only one who has captured the heart of this shy moon.' Delicately penned~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - very warm writing, and very soft you write this... BC |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
I really enjoyed this arthur |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
For your breath has raised up the moon within my soul. And, you are the only one who has captured the heart of this shy moon. beautiful..I see the same words have captured others *s M |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Soooo romantic and lovely Ivy, I love this one, floria Floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* filled with all the soft moonlit romance that glows within your heart. This is so beautiful, Ivy...the feeling of it was of contentment with love. I love it. **big hugs** I hope this means that love again fills the moon of your heart. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* how lovely and so romantic penned...enjoyed every line... Charisma |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Ivy Rose, This is so pretty, and the images in it are so clear I can see them. Good writing. Nan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words you always create! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may the moon always shine in your heart and guide you with a warm loving face of your love forever! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"Adornments of love creating a match of this rare, fathomless, melding of two souls." I love it! It struck a chord in me or somthing... thanks for sharing! Donate to Rhonda's Crossing the Atlantic Fund!!! |
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