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Temptress
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0 posted 2002-01-30 08:43 PM


okay..this is rambling...Sorry..
**shrugs**
I must be in love, oh yes.
there is a you and I speak of me
and speak of you and me
and loving and breaking
and bonding..
so we are just walking
and I'm holding the hand of shadows
because I must be in love
and if I am in love then
let it be with shadows.
At least no one can question a shadow.
Let all eyes watch the defile
regular profiles cast aside
I MUST BE THIS WANTONLY LOVING WOMAN
that speaks through others whispering eyes
sooo...
just
READ ON
and I must be in love..
oh yes
because my poems are bonding
loving
caressing and kissing
filled with nights that paint their memory
on my soul
and yes..
because the soul is involved
ohh dear!
I simply must (yes must) be in love
and if I am then let it be with you
whom they don't know.
and let it be with me
that you love
and if they all think they know
then let them walk beside us
and learn their illusions
could be dangerous
and their thoughts of well being
could just be directioned
in the wrong direction.
But we simply must be in love
because

because

because
After all
we speak
and play
and banter
and all this
OUT LOUD.
Hello, Love
are we rosepedaling
Are we in love?
And if they all think they know
then let them walk beside us
and learn their illusions just might be true
but we do it our way if we are,
don't we?

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-30 08:51 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...and you deserve to be in love for your gorgeous words speak on so many volumes of beauty and love from your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) We all wish you the greatest happiness, sweet friend, may all the love you desire come to you and speak to you forever! Fabulous work, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-30 09:06 PM


Jenn, I love the way you ramble...I have always wanted to do something like this piece.  Perhaps this will inspire me to give it a go. This is great whether it be illusion or reality....sounds like love to me.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

strbbux
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3 posted 2002-01-30 10:52 PM


Temptress there is nothing better than rambling on and on about LOVE,, the most wonderful thing in the world. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-01-31 06:08 PM


I would say that you are very much in love with someone.

And, even if you're not, it's not up to us to wonder.  It's up to us to be happy for you.

This is wonderful, thank you again for sharing.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Corinne
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state of confusion
5 posted 2002-01-31 06:10 PM


Lovingly lovely, me lovely lass!

Cor

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