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Dreamy Valentines Day
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Dreamy Valentines Day |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Dreamy Valentines Day I wake up and I'm kinda sad because nothing special has happened good or bad On this day suposed to be full of love he left with out even so much as a nudge As I wake up more from this little nap I discover a note placed beside me in one of his caps "when you wake up sleepy head, Get your self up out of bed." "Get cleaned up and meet me here..... Yes your clothes are perfect have no fear" "I hope your nervous as hell I plan to scare you.. Thats all I'll tell" I jump up and make a mad dash for the coffee pot then the bath pouring all kinds of scents Oh yes I caught the hints When I arive to my surprise Its a hotel , now a problem has arised I know not which room you see The lady at the desk say's, "No worries heres your keys." I slowly open up the door and the first thing I see is on the floor another note for me to read it says " Look around I hope you will be pleased" Slowly I take it all in all over the ceiling red heart baloons wild flowers and lit candles fill the room On the table from here I can see A perfect feast made for you and me I walk into the bathroom from the shower you apear handing you a towel you draw me near From somewhere you hand me a shoping bag Victoria Secrets "Thats where you were at." Something for me to wear, what a nice treat desert for your eyes while we eat The scare me part has come into play because I've never seen you act this way "Please don't stop surprising me" I say. On this Dreamy Valentines Day By Connie McDonald Copyright@2001 Feb. 14, 2001 |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awwwwww, I wish some surprises like this would happen to me!! very romantic!!  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh how absolutely sensually romantic...now this is the way to spend Valentine's Day....I love it...I love it. **big hugs**  **big big smiles of delight**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I dream of suprising my girl so much once I have her in my arms forever on days like this! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Now there is a man that knows how to make his woman happy! Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Connie, how lucky can a woman be? LOL very nice. floria Floria |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Was this a dream or for real? Wow, that is so romantic. I'll bet that meal had to wait a bit, and dessert came first. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Connie, this is so exciting and romantic. How lucky can a woman get?! Good write. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Rose, Startime, Noah, Sandra, Floria, Midnitesun, Enchantress Thanks ... To all of you I am getting all worked up wondering whats going to happen this year... LOL I just had to post last year Thanks Connie |
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