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Oceans Edge |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Oceans Edge Take me to the oceans edge where salty air cleans my head where thunderouse noise of tide and wave calls to me when having a bad day To sit and look toes playing in the sand I can feel and see the real of Gods hand and believe again in this to shall pass for love in life is what shall last By Connie McDonald Copyright@2002 Jan. 30, 2001 2:45 pm [This message has been edited by Zinsser (01-30-2002 06:13 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may His breath of hope and comfort always caress between your toes on the oceans edge and caress you with light and love always when you need it the most! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Noah, thank you... your the one with the beautiful heart.... : ) |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
TAKE ME WITH YOU! I need to clear my head and relax. RP |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Rose, OK sure ... come on...... : ) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I really enjoyed this... especially the lines: "toes playing in the sand I can feel and see the real of God's hand and believe again in this too shall pass for love in life is what shall last" That's so beautifully true! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!That is what I love about the ocean too....I could just sit there for hours and dream and think and just feel...stunning. I love this poem...the ocean...like storms...always leaves me with such a clean feeling within. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Yes! The ocean is one of my favorite places to relax. Thanks for the reminder. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Is so true and pretty romantic too I breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Melissa: Thanks very much... I love those lines too Startime: I love storms too.... Love lightning Thanks Silver: My Pleasure.. Thanks Moon:Romantic yes... but watch out for the sand...ouch LOL : ) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zinsser~ 'I can feel and see the real of Gods hand and believe again' Many times I have gone to the ocean to feel His touch~ This is lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Marge: Humble Thanks to You : ) Thank You |
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