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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-01-30 05:59 PM

Between orchid rain and deep purple skies
are lavender cosmos and eerie doll eyes
tangled within silken webs of the night
whispers swirling within a serpentine light
blanched driftwood in billows of reminisce
caught within the sighs of a passionate kiss
leafy voices stalk shadows in the night
footprints upon sands, within tides of midnight
stimulating passion in belfries of moonlight
penumbra fingers gently fondle the air
placing a rosebud in soft chestnut hair
fragrance of dead roses lingering there
beneath a blanket of dreams, still unaware
eerie doll eyes in a mirror they stare

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-01-30 06:05 PM

This is so good, Vic. Has a hint of sensuosness, and Steven King, all mixed up. Cool!
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-30 06:07 PM

WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I just love the imagery and colors you paint in your words, your dreamscape words always make me sigh and see such passionate lovely masterpieces! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your poems always make me smile and inspire me, we all love you so much, this is a true galaxy of dreams! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-01-30 06:13 PM

This is so unbelievably good, Victoria...its one of those poems which, when I read it I always say "I wish I could write like that"

Between orchid rain and deep purple skies
are lavender cosmos and eerie doll eyes
tangled within silken webs of the night
whispers swirling within a serpentine light
blanched driftwood in billows of reminisce

this is so beautiful!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-30 06:15 PM

*grin* there was an eerie feeling seeping through the beauty of this poem...sent shiver up my spine. Very well done. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-01-30 06:21 PM

Wow Victoria!! You write sooo discriptive and beautiful just like my mistletoe Angel!
I love this

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-01-30 11:05 PM

A wonderfully, smooth well written jewel. Thanks for sharing.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-01-30 11:46 PM

thank you sandra...always nice to hear from you hugss

noah..

thank you Madame..so nice of you to say hugss

karen..thank you so much..i was hoping to achieve that feeling hugss

joanna..well that is a compliment..as i love his poems hugss

newell...thank you and for peeking in tonight newell

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2002-01-31 12:04 PM

Oh goodness Victoria, you just keep getting better.
I won't even attempt to pick and choose which lines I liked the best.....

There's a sense of magic in your words~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-01-31 12:28 PM

~V~

Orchid rain.....I love that....just beautiful...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-01-31 08:28 AM

ms.serenade..thank you so much...im pleased you enjoyed..

hugs

Lauren..thank you for peeking in Lauren..always nice to hear from you..hugs

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2002-02-05 03:43 AM

Victoria-
   Very cool write, my friend.
   I like the feel of this one.
   Thanks for sharing it.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2002-02-05 11:40 AM

thank you Vicky..nice of you to peek in today..glad you enjoyed

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

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