Open Poetry #18 |
Through the Stony Pass |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Lamentations 3: 9 [9] He hath inclosed my ways with hewn stone, he hath made my paths crooked. Each step is on barren stone, Their echoes are mine alone, Marble blocks reach to the sky, Maze of ways for me to try. Frosty clouds form in the air, Winds have gone I know not where, Blowing not in this canyon Where fate has now abandon. As the full moon slowly falls Footsteps lonesome echo calls; Soon this night will turn to day, Will it’s bright light guide my way Or force me back to shadows, Till my next path of sorrows. Gloom |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Gloom Very gloomy and well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Such a beautifully haunting poem, sweet friend, may the path ahead always be filled with light and hope for you; just believe in yourself and you will climb far! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
"Show me your ways, O LORD, teach me your paths;" Psalms 25:4 Have not man's ill chosen paths always led to sorrow, and gloom? Very nicely written, Gloom! -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (01-30-2002 02:58 PM).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
as always..... very well done you always show wisdom of life in your gloom of a way : ) |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, sodpossom, For your kind response Thank you, Mistletoe Angel, Pleased that you enjoyed. Thank you, Silver Streak, There have been times when the paths led To a glorious place, but even then The People took 40 years to go that short distance because of Man’s inabilities. Thank you, Zinsser, As always your words are kind and supportive. Gloom |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This was very well written but very very spoooooky, Gloom! I liked it a lot! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Madame Chipmunk, For your words and animation, I didn’t actually think of it as spooky, Glad you enjoyed. Gloom |
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