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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there is another woman that I see sometimes when you are out of town for the weekend we sneak away to some secret place where no one knows us where she can be wicked she is everything you are not like an anti you seeming to relish going against all that you have tried to be she says being loose is erotic and dressing without modesty is a turn on especialy when others look at her and are bold with their desires she speaks a different language too one with the school yard words you never heard or have tried to forget she says she has seen you with me and that it is obvious I want more than just you she laughs then and shows me what it is that I have been missing she spells promiscuous with pouting lips and talks with her mouth full I had to tell you of her today it is time she is out in the open and I wanted you to know that it will be ok for you to be her more often ©Dark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this one is so truthful, I thought maybe you were writing of me *s very nice D M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hmmm Ds, there is always that other woman there, just waiting to be the desire for you to share! Indeed....there is always the other woman....hiding inside. Cool write hon, but darn, I was hoping it was me........*winkie winks to you sweetie* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dark, this is so true and is it not so that there is the division...Madonna or not but never both at the same time. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
NT Thank you for your read and comments, I appreciate your moments, I guess she could be most anyone or everyone. GS, you yes, and she, yes....she/you sometime all the time perhaps thank you [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-30-2002 06:46 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Kethry, it is pleasure to have them both fighting for identity on the battleground of my body thank you |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I absolutely love this  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling wickedly* oh gosh have you been peeking..  I think there is a little of this in each woman...I know there is a mixture in me Very well said....**big hugs**:kiss;Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
DS~ A little dark, a little of softer moods....maybe each of us hold these qualities, or we are looking for one such as you to unleash the loose erotic.... LC~ Step through the |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Variety and spice for life. Much enjoyed! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I like your reply to Keth as much as I enjoyed the thought of the poem itself... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee...and I thought you were writing about me! The one who comes out at unexpected times! I love this!!!!!! A lot! Oh YES!!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SEA, thank you for your blessings of replies Startime, I enjoy your reviews, and yes this one is about all women...they are lovely in their gemini thank you Lauren, soft hardness....blush and blaze, blending of light and dark in sigh songs Thank you Martie, varity in one package, the constant change of woman, that is the spice of life..thank you for your read and words Starshine, thank you for your whisper walk, and for your thoughts about all of this image Nancy, if the mini skirt fits please wear it and model it on that stairway there..thank you for your sweet review [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-30-2002 01:01 PM).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
The trick is to find the partner the can handle both.... : ) and doens't put one or the other in a box....... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Zinsser, well stated my friend..both should be cage free to fly and return as they pleased thank you for the read |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! (giggles) Ooohhhhhhh, I know just how you feel, for I believe everyone has this unique side to them, an imp for something more! (smiles) This is sooooooo clever and delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Friend Noah, thank you for your reviews and replies, I appreciate you |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Dark Stranger, do I ever love how this ended, It made my day.. she is right there with you every day. love it. floria Floria |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Floria, thank you for seeing, for reading, for the smile... |
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