Open Poetry #18 |
In Love or Insane? |
Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
What is it that makes one Not stay away? What is it that makes one's Thoughts wander, and wonder? Why is it so disorienting To believe you see someone And then not be so sure... Looking so hard that Your eyes play tricks In selective sight. What is that in the sky? Is it really a cloud, Or something else? And what of the bright Bonfire?Are there Not visions in those Dancing flames? Or is it simply A dancing flame? And then, what of The curling smoke? Is that not an apparition In the haze? I follow my heart With eyes through Which my soul Gazes. If I follow my mind, I question myself too Closely: Am I in love Or Am I insane? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* they say that love does strange things..I know for me it makes the world seem a very magical place to be...I become dreamy and I guess the eyes see what they want to see....**big hugs** you aren't insane. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
Thank you for your encouragement, Startime. Sometimes I wonder if insanity wouldn't be easier to deal with. |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
VERY GOOD! I really like this one, and can relate to it sometimes. I know how you feel, and you did a very good job expressing the feeling. . Nice. Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
yes you are insane, but isn't it wonderully refreshing. I liked this. J |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are never crazy, sweet friend, love is such a beautiful and mysterious thing and can touch our hearts in the most fascinating ways! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may loves happiness sing in your heart forever! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I love your thoughts you've penned in this one! I agree with Mistletoe Angel, love works in mysterious ways! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very well said, Ladyhawke. Love can make you feel insane sometimes. |
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