Give Yourself To Me - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-01-29 05:24 PM

Give to me your pleasure
As you take away my pain
Kiss me like you mean it
As we stand here in the rain

Tell me that you love me
That you always will be mine
Make the ultimate sacrifice
And love me 'til the end of time

Ignore my imperfections
Indulge yourself in sweet desire
Join me in love's paradise
As we ignite one anothers fire

Give to me your heart
And let me hold it in my hand
Devour me beneath the moonlight
As we frolic on the sand

Smother me in southern kisses
As our love takes wing in flight
Within the confines of our passion
Is where we'll spend this wondrous night

Cast away your inhibitions
Allow your spirit to be set free
I'll reel you into my love nest
As you give yourself totally to me

Slaves to our desires
So devoted am I to you
We'll scale new peaks of passion
For you there is nothing I wouldn't do

Suetang

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-29 05:32 PM

WOW!!!!Sounds so much like love to me that I bet it is love...this poem is filled with sensual desire...the kind that turn the blue pages red with passion....I LOVE IT!!! I hope he put himself into your tender loving hands.

**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

2 posted 2002-01-29 05:47 PM

A very passionate poem well done!Frolic in the sand,I like that!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-29 06:22 PM

(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your loving heart forever sing happily in true love and be kissed by eternity and true joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-29 07:39 PM

There is so much love expressed in this poem Sue, just lovely, romantic, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

5 posted 2002-01-29 09:54 PM

I enjoy the purity of the love you pen Sue...this poem being no exception.It warm even this northern heart, it may be -25 outside, but it's hot in here!!!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2002-01-29 10:01 PM

Thank you all for your wonderful replies. In my defence and in reply to Brian's comment, it is Summer over here in Australia so that is my excuse for writing such a passionate piece of poetry. You all know how much I love writing stuff like this so I'm sure you're not surprised.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-01-29 10:31 PM

Sue, Just loved this piece as it warmed me straight through on a cold winters night.
Wonderful!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2002-01-29 10:38 PM

Sue, this is sensually beautiful

I always enjoy your romantic pieces.

...And poor Brian, you say that it's -25?...yikes! It's + 12 in Southern Ontario

tee hee~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (01-29-2002 10:39 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-01-29 10:43 PM

I like a woman that knows what she wants...James

jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

10 posted 2002-01-29 10:47 PM

I like this stanza the best

"Cast away your inhibitions
Allow your spirit to be set free
I'll reel you into my love nest
As you give yourself totally to me"

Thank you this was very pretty..

Jen

Treasure every moment that you have!
Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the present!!

thepoeticplumber
Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

11 posted 2002-01-29 11:00 PM

Unbeleivable strength of love comes across in this writing Sue. I could feel it just encompassing every aspect of total love. It was absolutely full of beautiful desire. It was stirring to the imagination. Be very proud of yourself for writing this great poem. Your friend, Roger

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

12 posted 2002-01-30 12:23 PM

Summer in the land downunder sounds passionate indeed!!
An excellent description of love in season.
Great work!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2002-01-30 01:02 AM

Now you know I love this poem!. And so I 'stole' the title to include it in my plagiarism medley.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.