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To Come Alive
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To Come Alive |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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To Come Alive A cool morning breeze awakens me as you pass by, leaving me behind to drift off again to whispers of desire, eyes half opened hoping to see my dreams come alive and to dance to the tune of desire in the early morning light. ~Wynter [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-29-2002 10:02 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You have to love those dreams. Too bad they are not true when you come to full awake, though. Nice writing, Maureen. Sandra |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
I get this way every time the alarm clock goes off, my dream is that it's the weekend instead of a work day LOL.No such luck though!!! Great poem Maureen, one day your dream will come true!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Maureen...you manage to say so much in so few words....very well done. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, once I've had a dream I wince to hope if my love is in my arms and I'm saddened to see she's not, but yet I always feel delighted that dreams can come true, just as they will for you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely thoughts M.. enjoyed~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so very soft and pretty, Maureen...now you can drift back into your dreams.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love it when dreams come alive...*grin* of course when I am asleep all my dreams and fantasies come to life...now if only I could figure out how to transfer that to reality. I love this poem. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Ahhh .... to be alive!! A shame that the mind sometimes misleads us to believing our dreams are found. Perhaps the day you feel more than a whisper dreams will be plenty bound. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, this is definitely a lovely dream, cool and refreshing. "A cool morning breeze awakens me as you pass by, leaving me behind to drift off again to whispers of desire" PS.The title is included in my poem Forgive Me My Plagiarisms. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-30-2002 01:00 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
catalinamoon...this one was true once..I remember when I wrote it and even who it was for...but those days are gone *s thankyou Sandra brianb...I feel as if every day has been the same now for about 2 years..none any more special than another..actually I have no dreams at the moment..I wore them out I think.*s Nancy...this was a poem from a while back..was the first quick filler I found for that lapse of intelligence last evening *s Thank you, M Noah...I hope you see your dreams come true..you have a lifetime ahead of you to do just that. Victoria...thanks.. hugs ..btw..I think I am one of those thorns Lyra...drift back..I am trying to remember the actual time I last dreamt... and can't...*s M Karen...some day I won't need to dream...maybe it isn't all that far away... hugssss back M Craig...yes, now isn't that the truth..mind and body and heart I am afraid. Wouldn't it be wonderful..to feel more than a whisper??? Midnitesun...I use to feel this every morning..no alarm clocks need waken me. Thank you for including me in your title poem...I have often done that..never called it plagiarism,though...Maybe should have called it "Others Desires" *s M |
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