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Walter Burns
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0 posted 2002-01-29 09:43 PM


Love makes

the world go round
the world go round
the world go round


Love makes

the world go round
the world go round
the world go round


enter good friends response:

and it makes you puke from being dizzy

[This message has been edited by Walter Burns (01-29-2002 10:01 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-01-29 09:50 PM



Why, I think I know you...

Walter Burns
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2 posted 2002-01-29 09:54 PM


Yes you do. I need a change
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3 posted 2002-01-29 11:26 PM


Hello there, Walter. Changes keep the world goin 'round.
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4 posted 2002-01-29 11:31 PM


hmmm do I know you?? Ah yes Love makes the world go round...I guess I get kinda dizzy from getting a new boyfriend every month or so hehehhee
Startime
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5 posted 2002-01-29 11:35 PM


OOps...I guess it does...and that too. **big hugs** mmmmm maybe hold the kiss until after the mess is all cleaned up

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Nan
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6 posted 2002-01-30 07:05 AM


EEEWWWWW.... Don't throw up in THIS forum... The maid is off today...
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7 posted 2002-01-30 10:09 AM


enjoy
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2002-01-30 10:22 AM


oh I knew it was you all the time..I wanted to send you a message last night saying how my goof up managed to beat out my nice poem that it replaced by mistake..can you believe that?
So try that..goofing up...and see

just kidding
Me

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9 posted 2002-01-30 10:23 AM




BRAVO!!! Yes, I think we do know you, this is such a creative and delightful poem! (smiles) Sometimes love is all around us we get dizzy in its essence! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-30-2002 10:23 AM).]

sodpossom
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10 posted 2002-01-30 10:39 AM


I got a little dizzy myself reading this.Very interesting perspective!
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11 posted 2002-01-30 05:25 PM


LOL okay is the room ever gonna stop spinning so I can see the man behind the mask, I know there's got to be a way out of here somewhere. Great poem Walt, glad to see you spinning around here as usual.
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12 posted 2002-01-30 06:43 PM


Umm.. I wouldn't claim ya..err..I mean..I don't know ya!

Keeping me smiling. Thats a difficult thing to do. This is silly. enjoyed!


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13 posted 2002-01-30 07:24 PM


Oh good, Walt, thanks a lot....now I won't be able to get that song out of my head all night....hehehe......very cute! Now clean up that mess!
Walter Burns
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14 posted 2002-01-30 07:31 PM


Well see now thank yu... I mean you all!
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