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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-01-29 08:29 PM

For You

That question
just simply thrilled me
scared me and totally struck my heart
with the thump of realization
that your heart in mine just had to be strong.
That question
the request of a promise
that someday you asked of me
and I said
Yes
someday
when there are no more things to hold our obligations
and when we, can finally fulfill
our obligations to love and to our hearts
and to one another.
I went to you in search of friendship
walked through some soul glue
and now yours is entwined with mine
and that question
just turns my doubts to ash
and it will please me
if you never take it back.
Never
that question
coupled with my tears stirring
Ever
believing in the you
and in the me
and with the us we will one day light the world.
Rooms will glow when we stroll in.
Old and young faces will smile
when glimpsing the masterpiece
of our together.
Love will have no stronger spokespersons
than you and I
still sticky from the soul glue
that binds us.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-29 08:34 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your loving heart forever be attached to his in eternal glue and may your heart fully melt with his in time as your faith and trust of loves timelessness grows on! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fantastic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet jenn, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-29 08:41 PM

Ever
believing in the you
and in the me
and with the us we will one day light the world.
Rooms will glow when we stroll in.
Old and young faces will smile
when glimpsing the masterpiece
of our together.
Love will have no stronger spokespersons
than you and I
still sticky from the soul glue
that binds us.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jenn! This is exquisitely beautiful!!
This touches a place inside me....can't explain just now...but please know that it does. Thank you for this.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-29 08:43 PM

This is so lovely, touching, soft,Temptress I love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2002-01-29 11:13 PM

I really, really like this!

What a wonderful way with phrases and sentiment...well expressed!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-01-29 11:44 PM

Oh my gosh...this poem is magnificent...I love the way the glue of your love holds you both together...a seal that will make your love stronger as you bond together in your love. Stunning. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-01-30 11:10 PM

Beautiful!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2002-01-30 11:53 PM

I love this, especially the "soul glue"
that holds your heart in tact.

May you never come unglued!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-01-31 12:11 PM

"I went to you in search of friendship
walked through some soul glue
and now yours is entwined with mine"

Temptress, that is outstanding! IWIHWT.
You have written with such feeling and depth about the strength of emotional bonding. BRAVO!!!

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

9 posted 2002-01-31 12:13 PM

Vey stunning display of using just the right words to create this well-crafted, soul-stirring, poem. VERY WELL-DONE!!!

***Ivy Rose

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

10 posted 2002-02-01 04:16 PM

Very well done Temptress, you speak to even the most jaded of hearts.

Thank you for sharing.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-02-01 04:43 PM

And don't you even consider getting some
glue remover....This is a nice poem..enjoyed.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

12 posted 2002-02-01 07:11 PM

SOUL GLUE... I like that concept.. This is good, Tempting one...

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