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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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Nashville

0 posted 2002-01-29 08:22 PM


Coldness that emits
a lasting glove of warmth
begining with twilight
that lavish few seconds.
Wind from the North
bringing with it a glance
of cool eyes portrayed
in loving wonderment.
I still feel the wind
as it races into me
my body aching to be held
in some special fashion.
Letting the lake call
the waters presenting
their own sort of sanity
as they ripple my mind.
My thoughts drift onward
always away, to the top
of some majestic mountain
where I can fall on my sins.
Then closing my eyes,
for that split moment
I feel your lips upon me,
and let the wind take me again.

© Copyright 2002 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2002-01-29 08:34 PM


The wind brushes you gently
with a kiss to heal your pain
Past sins are now forgotten
there is only love to gain

*sigh* I just couldn't help writing this....Your pain called out so clearly from your words....I hope a hug and a kiss can help...but I know they are such little things...Just please know my heart hurts for you. **big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-29 08:37 PM




(big hugggsssssss) So very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, may love forever now kiss your tears away and guide you with comfort to replace the pain forever and ever! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo touching, all our hearts cry out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-29 08:47 PM


Very sad, beautifully written Michael, so well expressed. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2002-01-29 09:22 PM



I have missed your poetry.  Welcome home!

Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
5 posted 2002-01-30 03:02 PM


Some winds from the north are not as cold as you my think, in fact, I have reason to believe that there are eyes of jade that wish only for warm winds your way.

Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.


Marina Crossley



Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
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Kelowna, BC, Canada
6 posted 2002-02-04 02:54 PM


Beautiful write MG.......just like you...
As Always........
Jenn E

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-02-04 03:04 PM


GR8 write!
I could feel the pain clear down here.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
8 posted 2002-02-04 04:36 PM


There are times when pain has a seductive sweetness.. and reading this was one...

compelling..

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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