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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-01-29 05:57 PM


I may be falling deeply in love
Or drifting out to sea
Within my fantasy world
Is where you'll often find me

When I need to escape
When I need to be set free
Into my fantasy world
Is where I'll take me

The days are always warmer
The sun continually shines
There is no longer any distance
Between your heart and mine

Mother Nature is at her peak
So much beauty does she bring
Many birds are in this paradise
Bringing me joy as they sing

They take to the skies
So graceful they are
And as night begins to fall
The sky is covered in stars

This blanket of diamonds
Shine down brightly on me
And if I pull back the blanket
A slice of heaven is what I'll see

Alas I'm now back to reality
But many memories still remain
Until I close my eyes and drift
Into my fantasy world again

Suetang

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1 posted 2002-01-29 06:15 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, your words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) I love to dream all the time too, it's my favorite time of day and I just wish I could dream of me in my girls arms forever! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-29 07:53 PM


Nice work, Sue.   It's good to see you posting.

Michael

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3 posted 2002-01-29 07:56 PM


I live in "La La Land" so knew this one well, hehe, great job on this Sue!

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4 posted 2002-01-29 08:00 PM


Very pretty, Sue.
-newell

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-01-29 08:01 PM


Wonderful piece of work here Sue!
I spend most of my time in that fantasy land so I know what you mean.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
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6 posted 2002-01-29 08:46 PM


STANDING OVATION!!!!....so it's you I see across the ocean of this fantasy world sharing it with me...mmmmmm now I have to look around for that phantom lover of mine... I know he is here someplace...If you happen to see him in your travels to meet your lover...send him to the Lethbridge, Canada will you. *giggling* girl do I ever know where you are coming from. **big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
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7 posted 2002-01-29 08:49 PM


I love that fantasy world Sue, I go there all the time. great poem. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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brianbeaudry
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8 posted 2002-01-29 08:53 PM


And thank God for our fantasy world huh Sue....

And if I pull back the blanket
A slice of heaven is what I'll see

I loved these lines


Larry C
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9 posted 2002-01-30 01:25 AM


Sue,
I like that. Mine's a little different.

thepoeticplumber
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10 posted 2002-01-30 09:59 PM


Our fantasy is such a nice place to be able to visit when needed.  Yours is such a perfect place to be.  What a warm and wonderful getaway you have.  It feels good to see your picture develop into my thought.  Thank you so, it was so soothing.  Your friend, Rog


cruz
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11 posted 2002-02-01 12:01 PM


Wonderful subject matter.  You've painted an awesome picture.  Well done.
Dee
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12 posted 2002-02-01 12:50 PM


Sue, you mean there is a real world outside my fantasies? Damn!
Dee

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ethome
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13 posted 2002-02-01 05:14 AM


What a beautiful fantasy!
I was right there with you. But hey! You've got to stop hogging the covers....a guy could freeze to death!
Seriously, I loved the fantasy...everyone has them and they're so fullfilling!

The Rusty Knight
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14 posted 2002-02-01 11:36 AM


Lovely poem....if uhhhh.....well when...just if you wanted to..I guess what I am trying to say if there is room for a  Rusty Knight on your next trip, his horse is always saddled.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Suetang
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15 posted 2002-02-01 04:15 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments and Dan, I'll keep that in mind for next time!

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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