Open Poetry #18 |
My Fantasy World |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I may be falling deeply in love Or drifting out to sea Within my fantasy world Is where you'll often find me When I need to escape When I need to be set free Into my fantasy world Is where I'll take me The days are always warmer The sun continually shines There is no longer any distance Between your heart and mine Mother Nature is at her peak So much beauty does she bring Many birds are in this paradise Bringing me joy as they sing They take to the skies So graceful they are And as night begins to fall The sky is covered in stars This blanket of diamonds Shine down brightly on me And if I pull back the blanket A slice of heaven is what I'll see Alas I'm now back to reality But many memories still remain Until I close my eyes and drift Into my fantasy world again Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, your words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) I love to dream all the time too, it's my favorite time of day and I just wish I could dream of me in my girls arms forever! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nice work, Sue. It's good to see you posting. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I live in "La La Land" so knew this one well, hehe, great job on this Sue! ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very pretty, Sue. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful piece of work here Sue! I spend most of my time in that fantasy land so I know what you mean. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
STANDING OVATION!!!!....so it's you I see across the ocean of this fantasy world sharing it with me...mmmmmm now I have to look around for that phantom lover of mine... I know he is here someplace...If you happen to see him in your travels to meet your lover...send him to the Lethbridge, Canada will you. *giggling* girl do I ever know where you are coming from. **big big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I love that fantasy world Sue, I go there all the time. great poem. floria Floria |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
And thank God for our fantasy world huh Sue.... And if I pull back the blanket A slice of heaven is what I'll see I loved these lines |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, I like that. Mine's a little different. |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Our fantasy is such a nice place to be able to visit when needed. Yours is such a perfect place to be. What a warm and wonderful getaway you have. It feels good to see your picture develop into my thought. Thank you so, it was so soothing. Your friend, Rog |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
Wonderful subject matter. You've painted an awesome picture. Well done. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, you mean there is a real world outside my fantasies? Damn! Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a beautiful fantasy! I was right there with you. But hey! You've got to stop hogging the covers....a guy could freeze to death! Seriously, I loved the fantasy...everyone has them and they're so fullfilling! |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Lovely poem....if uhhhh.....well when...just if you wanted to..I guess what I am trying to say if there is room for a Rusty Knight on your next trip, his horse is always saddled. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments and Dan, I'll keep that in mind for next time! Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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