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Perfect Woman |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Awakest thou sleeping beauty the time has come to full-fill your duties. Feed the kids and wash the dishes along with anything else your prince wishes. Take out the trash and scrub the floors when you're finished theres plenty more. Prepare his supper and rub his back didn't kiss his feet,you're getting slack. Go to bed and be his sex slave tell him hes so strong and brave. Speak of your unworthiness to belong to him because he is so wise and you are so dim. Just a little humor.I'm not like this.It does sound pretty good though! |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Stevie, you're a bad, bad boy. Below you shall find a reply from your princess. Dearest Prince, Are you out of your mind? Look in the mirror, do you think I'm blind? I love you but don't press you luck You're no Russell Crowe When you have his money ~ let me know! She's not really like this, but it sounds pretty good to her. Cheryl |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I relationship lacking in respect. But the respect of the written word works great foy you here. I liked it. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Cheryl Now that was reality.Can't I dream just a little?I don't have money or good looks,now you've stolen my dream from me.Life just aint fair! |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Stevie,shame on you but I do know better.If you were anything like this I would forget you`re grown and put you over my knee.I`m sending you the perfect woman.   Love,Mama |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
D. Thank you for the kind words. Mama Yea you know that I am a sweet obediant man.One of a kind! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Now, there's a perfect woman!  Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles) Ooohhhhh...you're in for it now! (smiles) This is such a clever poem, sweet friend, this made me smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stevie, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling wickedly* mmmm I do like the part that mentions a sex slave...  I might be interested in that part of the job...but am too old for children...thank goodness.. you cute man you...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
haha yer funny In repsonse, I'll have to quote the lyrics to my girl Shania Twain "Rub my feet, gimme something to eat fix me up my favorite treat Honey I'm back, my head's killin me I need to relax and watch tv Get off the phone, give the dog a bone hey, hey, Honey I'm home" ya like that? hehehehe I do! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Newell Yea,but I don't believe they make them like that. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Noah I think I stuck my head in a noose. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Startime Thanks for taking it easy on me,and about that sex slave thing.lol! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Rose Petal Yea,I like that too,but you got to admit my is funnier.lol! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words spoke many truths as I'm sure that is how it is with some relationships where the woman has no self worth and is a slave to the desires of the man. Wonderfully written and much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Stevie darling boy YOU know I’m the perfect woman don’t you, Mmmmmm. You know that I’d make you very happy. It’s not that difficult darling boy all you need is the knack and I’ve definitely got that Wonderful writing darling boy utterly wonderful and you know where to find me when you need me don’t you. Mmmmm at your feet of course where else would I be Lay back and rest my darling boy Cede to the touch I know you enjoy Feel my flame dancing there within Heating the fire that bathes your skin Feel your body yielding to my heat Give in to me feel my heart beat The perfect woman doesn’t do this I’m the one who feeds you utter bliss  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAHAHA sodpossom have you been talking to my husband? LOL great imaginative poem..floria Floria |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I like the effort made in describing what some men like, personally a subservient woman wouldn't be for me and as Suetangsuggests, there are some ladies who still like to keep hearth and home for 'their' man. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee, I don't think there are any women like this left around....or for that matter any men who would treat them like this.... I sure hope not!!! You need a good spanking!!  ~Better make that a hug! Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Stevie.....that is a very naughty poem! If I were her, I'd kick you out for being such a dirty lout I'd throw your stuff right out the door you'd walk all over me...nevermore never again will you ever brag about treating me like your dishrag I'd welcome you back if you would be sweet if you would do the dishes and rub my feet if you'd do the laundry and put it away I might even let you stay take me out every night for dinner and maybe I'll think you're a winner  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I had to borrow the title for a while. Please forgive me. PS, I really enjoyed the read! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
What's life without a little fantasy, as long as you remember to come back to earth and treat your sweety finer than fine! cute poem, as long as it's not the REAL YOU  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
sodpossum, It's men like you who bring us shame, Leaving us lonely and feeling lame. When it's women you wish to snub, Do it at a private mens club! A place that I would never join, In my wallet they won't perloin. If all this you want her to give, Be real sweet and she'll let you live! Too funny and way too dangerous! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dearest prince I'm at your beck by the way...last month's cheque? the dishes done... because I'm queen I smashed them into smithereens I've fed the kids you know I'm trying too bad... I fed them to the lion When I return I'll rub your back and wax it with my hair attack oh by the way you're strong and brave for volunteering ...my sex slave it's true I am so crass and dim that's why I left...and went to him Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (01-30-2002 07:10 AM).] |
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