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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-01-29 02:34 PM



A Little Star Thought
~*Marge Tindal*~

I took a little star thought
and flung it way up high
Twinkling with such merriment
to surely catch the eye



There it is reflecting
off the dish of full-moon
Oh, you know ...
the one that 'ran away with the spoon' !


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
sodpossom
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1 posted 2002-01-29 02:39 PM


Very cute and enjoyable!
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-01-29 03:09 PM


A star thought~  
It's what we wish upon but I've never read it quite this way before.
Love the thought.   Very cute Marge~  

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3 posted 2002-01-29 04:37 PM


Hickery dickery dock.........
It is so refreshing to read poems that dance,
they are like a circus coming to town.
While we stand on the side of the road,
in wander.
thanks

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4 posted 2002-01-29 04:49 PM


cute one Marge..as always..hugss love the moon too

             ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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Gaia
5 posted 2002-01-29 04:56 PM


Marge, you are a definitely moonstruck lover. This is adorable!  
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6 posted 2002-01-29 06:33 PM


Marge,
LOL...love it!  I want to know where the dish got it's legs?  LOL  Really nice poem dear friend!
Hugs
Cindi

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7 posted 2002-01-29 06:44 PM


You always bring me a smile
Thanks for the twinkle
Liz

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8 posted 2002-01-29 07:28 PM


HAHAH Marge this is just great, I am just getting ready to post a moon poem. I love this, floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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9 posted 2002-01-29 07:32 PM


Ahhhh....this is so fabulous. I'm in stitches laughing. Where do you come up with these ideas?  Great, just great.
Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

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10 posted 2002-01-29 07:38 PM


This is so cute, Marge!
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11 posted 2002-01-29 08:16 PM


*giggling* these little treasures are just pouring our of you...and of course I absolutely love it. MAGNIFICENT. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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12 posted 2002-01-29 08:22 PM


Twinkle, twinkle little star
How I love your thoughts, afar
And when I see the moon tonight
I'll think about your shining light.

Thanks! I love your poem!
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2002-01-29 09:05 PM


SodPossom~
Thank you .. it was a fun piece to do~

BluesSerenade~
I appreciate your thoughtful reply~

Mauddib~
Awwww, thank you~

Victoria~
Thanks, gal~

MidniteSun~
LOL .. ye .. that's me alright ~

Cindi~
LOL ... a 'dish' with legs ... must have been a real knockout, huh ?
Thanks, gal~

LizzieLady~
Thank you .. I'm always happy to share a smile with you~

Floria~
That ole moon is creating it's magic with us all~
Thank you so much~

Marti~
LOL @ your 'stitches'~
Shucks these thoughts just PLOP into my ink~
Thank you, sweetie~

SmartChick~
Sue .. I thank you, my friend~

StarTime~
Reckon the forum is lucky we only get full-mooned once a month~

SilverStreak~
I appreciate your rhymed reply~
*HUGS* to all~

***I couldn't help but think of my favorite little 'Ruggie' as I wrote this one ...
Ms.KRISTA ... hope you enjoy it, sweetie~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 2002-01-29 10:15 PM


Marge:  Such fun to read!  You are so versatile and always rewarding to read!

Betty Lou Hebert

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15 posted 2002-01-30 03:41 PM


BettyLou~
It is such FUN to write these little smile-teasers~
I'm glad my Ron liked it too~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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16 posted 2002-01-30 06:50 PM


Very *twinkly*, Marge! Cute!
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17 posted 2002-01-30 08:19 PM


This is so cute, Marge...you are the new Mother Goose

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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18 posted 2002-01-30 08:28 PM


What a cute read Marge!
Must be a full moon...out come the moon poems.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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19 posted 2002-01-30 10:29 PM


Oh how fun! And I love the moon picture
Sandra

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20 posted 2002-01-31 03:10 AM


Denise~
I love to spring a 'twinkly' on you~
Thanks, sweetie~

Lyra~
Awwww ... me just wuv that teddy~
Thank you sooooo much~

Enchantress~
Yeppers !  My 'moonies' get the best of me~
Thanks gal~

CatalinaMOON~
Why with an ID like yours ... OF COURSE you love the 'moon'~

Thanks to you all for enjoying this little piece of fun !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Nan
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21 posted 2002-02-01 06:25 PM


Cute... .. I'd know that little man in the moon anywhere...
dgvarner
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22 posted 2002-02-01 07:44 PM


CUTE CUTE!  teehee..a dish with legs...ooh baby!  

love it!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

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23 posted 2002-02-01 09:01 PM


Hello Marge

This was gorgeous.....I loved it!

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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24 posted 2002-02-02 09:27 AM


Delightful Marge!
I don't know how you can make it look so simple but be so fulfilling and interesting!
Just a gift I guess!

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25 posted 2002-02-02 10:19 AM


enjoyed it a lot
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26 posted 2002-02-04 07:38 PM


Nan~
Marge *smiles* as big as that moon !

DG~
Tee-Hee @ your 'ooh, baby'~
Smiling big time here !

SueTang~
Thank you, sweet lady~

ETHome~
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww !
I could just hug your neck ... consider it done !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Marge Tindal
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27 posted 2002-02-04 07:39 PM


VanDana~
Phooey-Phooey on ME~
I missed your sweet reply hiding on page 2~
I appreciate you, sweetie~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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