Open Poetry #18 |
Thy Written Word |
Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Trio of Triolets..inspired The mind's eye can see, what other's can't Thy written word 'tis not all it seems. When upset, not thinking, takes a slant The mind's eye can see, what other's can't. Hard at times, a message to implant Invading darkness, seducing dreams. The mind's eye can see, what other's can't. Thy written word is not all it seems. So beware thine heart, the written word Many have fallen, many lost trust. Not upon ears, no syllable heard So beware thine heart, the written word. Ever so softly, a tenderness stirred Dreaming thy lips, thought kisses a must So beware thine heart, the written word. Many have fallen, many lost trust. The written words that produce desire Will light the flames, and the candle burns. A wish for "real" can make one acquire The written words that produce desire. Taste of fantasy, stoking the fire Wanting of love, the reader still yearns The written words that produce desire Will light the flames, and the candle burns. Respectfully Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Alot of truth in this one.Very well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...yes indeed, and the flame is bound to burn forever as long as you cherish and nurture love with passion and faith! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
My Lady - and the candle burns, into the night... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Desire and candlelight ablaze in the night ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romantically perfect with a warning to be those who can be easily misled by the written word....Well said...I am so glad you were inspired to write this poem. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Lady Ollyne This was beautiful and so very true. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lovely words, hon, just lovely. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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