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Lady Ollyne
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0 posted 2002-01-29 02:32 PM




Trio of Triolets..inspired


The mind's eye can see, what other's can't
Thy written word 'tis not all it seems.
When upset, not thinking, takes a slant
The mind's eye can see, what other's can't.
Hard at times, a message to implant
Invading darkness, seducing dreams.
The mind's eye can see, what other's can't.
Thy written word is not all it seems.

So beware thine heart, the written word
Many have fallen, many lost trust.
Not upon ears, no syllable heard
So beware thine heart, the written word.
Ever so softly, a tenderness stirred
Dreaming thy lips, thought kisses a must
So beware thine heart, the written word.
Many have fallen, many lost trust.

The written words that produce desire
Will light the flames, and the candle burns.
A wish for "real" can make one acquire
The written words that produce desire.
Taste of fantasy, stoking the fire
Wanting of love, the reader still yearns
The written words that produce desire
Will light the flames, and the candle burns.


Respectfully
Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

© Copyright 2002 Lady Ollyne - All Rights Reserved
sodpossom
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1 posted 2002-01-29 02:46 PM


Alot of truth in this one.Very well done!
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-29 02:49 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...yes indeed, and the flame is bound to burn forever as long as you cherish and nurture love with passion and faith! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-01-29 04:37 PM


My Lady - and the candle burns, into the night...

BC

Victoria
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4 posted 2002-01-29 04:54 PM


Desire and candlelight ablaze in the night

               ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

Startime
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5 posted 2002-01-29 05:23 PM


*sigh* romantically perfect with a warning to be those who can be easily misled by the written word....Well said...I am so glad you were inspired to write this poem. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Suetang
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6 posted 2002-01-29 05:42 PM


Lady Ollyne

This was beautiful and so very true.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2002-01-29 07:21 PM


Lovely words, hon, just lovely.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



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