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One dance |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
If she hadn’t caught me looking each time If she hadn’t held my gaze without hesitation If she hadn’t smiled like she already knew me I never would have found a voice to ask her for the dance I never would have felt her hand in mine I never would have lost myself in the moment One dance and suddenly I can think of nothing else |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, Good thing she did! I can feel the emotions in the experience. I like this.  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
You know I love this don’t you? Of course you do. For yes, that was the perfect dance,… this is the perfect dance. And ya know? She can suddenly think of nothing else either. (btw, I love yer mushy side) You held me tight, my hand in yours Your heart beat against mine And danced me into wonderment A moment lost in time One dance, yes, just one dance I too, re-live within my mind The memory so precious I think of nothing else, I find If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (01-27-2002 11:09 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi Duncan! I know this feeling. Been there, done that! Wonderful, isn't it? -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nothing like a really special dance. Always worth taking a chance, isn't it? You sound very happy. Sandra |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
REAL GEM OF A POEM!!!!! So beautifully described...this magic moment of dance. ***Ivy Rose |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It happens so suddenly when we least expect it. May you dance the dance and always feel this way. Beautiful writing Duncan. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Duncan! So tell me....when did you dance with Tracey? You did...did you not?  Excellent feel to this one.....warm. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
hey duncan, save the last dance for me great poem! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
One dance and suddenly I can think of nothing else =================================== Youve got the "boogie fever" ... and no doctor can help.  I'm like a broken record that you can play ... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Duncan, How warm and beautiful this is, floria Floria |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I like the way your writings leave me wanting to hear more about it. Like this one. Leaves the Reader to ponder and I like that. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words sing with such happiness and a dance of pure grace! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, may you forever waltz with love into eternity! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* mmmmm you just melt into his arms and the dance seems to last an eternity....Oh gosh, I want to experience that....Dance...mmmm I think you are inspiring me, Duncan....**big hugs** Thank you. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Johnnie Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 27Indiana |
I liked this poem very much, brought back some memories. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
absolutely stunning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ 'If she hadn’t smiled like she already knew me' Now THAT'S a magic moment ! Lovely render~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Duncan, this is so romantic! It captures the feeling of that first electric moment so well. You know you have everyone dancing with this one. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Duncan Pretty nice.I feel like I was there. |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Wonderful! It's like she boldly sent an invitation with her eyes that he couldn't help but respond to. |
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Casidy Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 36The Heart of Texas |
"If she hadn’t held my gaze without hesitation" line made me smile remembering that is what someone once told me was my greatest asset... lovely dance Duncan |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 Cowboy you've got me wishing for a dance now... I love this |
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