Sonnet to a Hopeless Cause

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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-01-29 12:42 PM

Look deeply in my eyes, sweet love
do not turn back, nor run away
for time will be the robber of
our silken bond, if you don't stay.

Touch me with all the strength within
your deepest heart, so made of gold
take me to heaven, where we've been
my lover, do not sell your soul.

Hold me with arms of molten steel
kiss me with lips so burning hot
remember all that we can feel
Too late? Oh no, I say it's not.

Let love return from misty blue
for all of mine I give to you.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-01-29 12:46 PM

catalinamoon - what beauty to wake up to this morning.

BC

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-29 12:54 PM

*sigh* not a hopeless cause at all for your words show that your heart is waiting for love to hold you in arms of steel and give love life again...This is beautiful...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-01-29 01:15 PM

Touch me with all the strength within
your deepest heart, so made of gold
take me to heaven, where we've been
my lover, do not sell your soul.

I've written a few 'hopeless cause' poems myself. BTW...you make this sonnet thing seems effortless. Really related to this verse.

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

4 posted 2002-01-29 01:19 PM

Very beautiful!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2002-01-29 01:42 PM

Hey lady, loving the soft romance of your sonnet! Will light a candle to St. Jude for you!

Just beautiful Sandra!

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-29 02:11 PM

"Let love return from misty blue"
Catalina, I do love your words. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-29 02:47 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so sad but beautiful; your love is never gone, for your heart always beats with it and you will find true love that will always fill you with joy and a smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, we all wish you the greatest happiness! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-01-30 03:01 PM

What a precious gift!
Beautiful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-01-30 10:54 PM

Romantic words...James

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

10 posted 2002-01-31 12:09 PM

The misty blue is not a good place to be…but oh, when we return from it…we see the world through a whole new perspective, don’t we? A beautiful sonnet Sandra…to a not so helpless cause.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

11 posted 2002-01-31 12:22 PM

I love your style of writing. This poem a prime example of your writing excellence.

***Ivy Rose

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