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Shades of Love |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Painted in pastels awash in the sunrise we rose and fell together shining in the light passing between the shades. Once we stood so close until the horizon dropped off separating the space between us. Like a hot flame before our eyes clinging to the warmth, left to gaze. Bleeding through the sunset we ran together; windswept across the sky. Blending cream colors in the clouds dancing shadows in the moonlight. For a time, in perfect shades you filtered in and all around now pales in the afterglow fading in the light of love. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-27-2002 10:15 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words always make me smile, you are sooooooo romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
BluesSerenade, That light of love is pretty bright! Good write. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Noah, I'm hopeless! Many thanks Larry C~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*bump* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks, I needed that! It's the pleasure of your bump!! But you really shouldn't have~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You have expressed this so beautifully. I enjoyed this a lot. Sandra |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
pretty cool imagery yuh |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You paint a marvelous love...this is so beautifully displayed Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sandra~ Emotions are a continuous blend of colors and shades that shine in the light being shed on them. Sometimes the high intensity is a bit much... Thank you Sandra~Walt~ That yuh of yours is a very cool trademark! I take it as a compliment and I thank you~ Melissa~ I'm happy to know you enjoyed this. A thousand words can't paint the picture, nor is a picture worth a thousand words. It's just the way it is. Thanks so much for reading. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-29-2002 12:14 AM).] |
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Johnnie Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 27Indiana |
this is nice, blue is my favorite color, I would like to make a card out of this and send it to someone if you don't mind. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I don't mind at all, and I agree blue is a pretty shade color. It's....wait..we just had an earthquake! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We're rocking and rolling in Southern California. Now where was I? You can use my words and make your card any way you like ....that's pretty heady stuff and it would be an honor. thank you Johnnie now we are shaking...one more time over and out! |
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Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
love is such an awesome feeling, and you reflected it well...Great one! Chrissy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ This is 'Bluedeful'~  'dancing shadows in the moonlight' was a challenge phrase quite some time back ... this fits it perfectly~ Hope your 'shakey' is all over and all are safe~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - like your writing, especially this; 'dancing shadows in the moonlight.' To dance in the moonlight, just wonderful. Writing one just now to this theme... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Chrissy~ Thanks for stopping in. I appreciate your comments very much! Marge~ Well the 'shakey' hit pretty close to home but all is well. We don't have the snow to shovel we just shake rattle and roll. Thank you for always responding so kindly. Bill Charles~ I'm going to be honest, I almost gave up on this, in turn I appreciate your comments all the more. I look forward to reading your moonlight dance! Thank you sir~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so incredibly beautiful...there is such a gentle softness to your words that I love to read...Magnificent writing.. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Blues..standing close to memories make them live again like the new morning sunrise well done |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
For a time, in perfect shades you filtered in and all around now pales in the afterglow fading in the light of love. So sad, yet this sings in colors of a poets heart. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yes! It's as though they disappear behind the clouds only to shine through again. That's a nice thought, like a ray of sun. Thanks DS. Duncan~ Nothing stays the same even our sadness dissipates over time. Surely I have my moments but it's a bottomless pit to dwell upon them. Thank you~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
AAAAAaaK I'm sorry Startime~ I'm not too observant today. Thank you for enjoying and leaving your soft words in reply. Hugs back at you~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow! First, love the new pic!! and then, I gotta tell you, I loved this poem!!! fantastic |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sometimes those shades get a little blurry.... if you know what I mean. I've missed reading you, it's so good to see you. Thank you SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
when loves fades everything returns to grey real fast...but hopefully will return to vibrant shades of pinks and blues again..hugs nicely written ms.serenade~ ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice Blues, I wanted to pick out my favorite lines, but I like them all. floria Floria |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Victoria, Vandana, Strbbux~ Thank you gals for reading and leaving your nice replies. I'm glad you enjoyed and so happy to know you were here. |
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