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Rainbow Rising
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Rainbow Rising |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“RAINBOW RISING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Searched out over the valley, the other side, I could see… Wind blowing softly on my face, cool breeze, just fondling me… Misty visions, in the clouds, watching that rainbow rising… Full of colors, in my eyes, breath taking, addicting… Found my spirit once again, on this mountain high… Just sitting and watching, sensing magic, to mystify… Quenched my thirst inside, a heart dried out, from tears… Never need to search again, when that rainbow, disappears… ~~~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Quenched my thirst inside" I love that line...sometimes we just need to put something back in the "spiritual bank". Nature always does it for me too. You expressed this beautifully! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
may a rainbow rest in your soul...helen |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ahh rainbows...such a heavenly sight to accompany the sky. you make me sigh and swoon bill  rp |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing Bill...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, Sounds like there is a redwood near by. A lovely sight you always paint. Environments of healing. Thanks. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, rainbows shine from your heart with joy and grace! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, ooohhhhhh...I missed for you a few days, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Bill! Come dance on a rainbow with me..... ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* now why is it when you write I can see the absolute beauty of your vision and I am always inspired to write something with the same kind of magic in it? I don't know the answer but it sure is good to see your visions here again. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Just lovely sentiment here bill. floria Floria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy Oh my I knew you were good, but I never knew you were this good. Do you know how good this really is? Not just the sentiments although they are excellent. I mean the construction the flow the internal rhythm this is utterly stunning. This truly paints a beautiful picture YOU are indeed a master of art here I’m not often presented with such delight, I’ve seen wonder and been astounded by it before, this however is utterly utterly fantastic. You’ve surpassed yourself here. You’re always a good writer, in this you’re a great writer Do I love this? What do you think? …………. YES I love it Absolutely first class writing  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Theres got to be a rainbow somewhere.Very nice! |
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