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brianbeaudry
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0 posted 2002-01-28 10:01 PM


Frog’s Breath

It’s a place of rare beauty and such eerie imagery
That hints of a different world, full of wizardry
The marshes in the dark of night, a haunting shadowed place
Where standing chicos hold the stars in naked arm’s embrace
It is not a place for the timid nor the weak of heart
From its misty shadows much fear does it impart
Fire-flies caught up in patches of swirling mist belie
Ghoul and phantom forms with green and blinking eyes
Cat-tails casting shadows by the pale light of the moon
Fading in and out of sight as the fog around them swoon
The ceaseless chirping of frogs keeping evil at its bay
And oppressive stench and rot of Mother Earth’s decay
If you look very deeply into the mist you may sight
Frogs lined up on lily-pads croaking to the night
Their warm breath mixing with the colder air outside
To create a dense cloaking fog in which they crouch and hide
If you venture into the swamps after it’s turned dark
It’s a magical mystical journey upon which you embark
The floating mist will envelope you, direction will be lost
Shapes will surround you, your mind they will accost
Walk on very carefully be cautious where you tread
As by the marshes spirits you are pulled and you are led
Just stay within the densest fog and show no fear this night
Let frog’s breath conceal you as it wraps around you tight

Brian Beaudry

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1 posted 2002-01-28 10:09 PM


Oh my gosh.....okay I want to wander in this world you weave but only if I can have a knight to hold me safely in his embrace....*grin* I just couldn't help replying like that...I love to sit around a fire in the woods at night and let the sounds of the night life put me to sleep...**big hugs** I love this poem, Brian.

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2 posted 2002-01-28 10:22 PM


Dear Brian,
From the title I thought it was going to be funny-but I found out different right away. Eerie and beautiful and scary all at once. Great poem!

Nan

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3 posted 2002-01-28 10:27 PM




BRAVO!!! Oooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautifully surreal, sweet friend, I just love the visions you create with your words! (big hugggsssss) May we all come through the mist and embrace these fantasies with a smile and find serenity and beauty! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



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Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-28 10:34 PM


Sounds and feels like one of my favorite fishing places.
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strbbux
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5 posted 2002-01-28 10:50 PM


Wow Brian, I could smell the water and hear the frogs. We had a creek run across our backyard at the last home we had, and it was full of frogs, and this reminded me of it. Nice, very expressive. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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6 posted 2002-01-28 10:50 PM


Wow Brian, I could smell the water and hear the frogs. We had a creek run across our backyard at the last home we had, and it was full of frogs, and this reminded me of it. Nice, very expressive. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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7 posted 2002-01-28 11:09 PM


Very original and unique Brian..eerie it is...ha..nicely done indeed...

              ~Victoria~

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