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That Twinkle
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That Twinkle |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
 From the smile of your face I was lured into a chase I had to meet you And the size of my heart grew I watched you walk away Because I didn’t know what to say But you weren’t too far away And I needed to find a way Just to say hello Or I would never know If you were the one for me So I smiled for you to see Then you glanced in my direction With a sparkle of perfection That twinkle said it all As you whispered “give me a call” |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh WOW!!!What a single look can convey....Bravo!!! I am so glad you saw the twinkle that told you what you wanted to hear. Well done. I love this poem...It flows perfectly and feels wonderful. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
I like what's going on here....yes, a smile and a twinkle can say a lot and mean a lot more...i wonder why words....oh, may be to express, like this, later....  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Insect~ You've got the 'magic'~ 'With a sparkle of perfection That twinkle said it all As you whispered “give me a call” *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey blondie!! i'm loving this little ditty.. its amazing what a look can say, eh.. (so...did ya call..or what??  )hug, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ "and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls [This message has been edited by dgvarner (01-29-2002 12:11 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
chuckling here, ah the thrill of the hunt!!! Loved your whispered ending there, insect. This one gave me a bit of a tingle.  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
the thrill is in the chase enjoyed insectnice to see you back again ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Wow!Very sweet!I could see this taking place.Nice job! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, it always makes me smile to see such magic come just by the twinkle in ones eye or tears! (big hugggsssss) This is so sweet, sweet freind, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhhha yes. Lois is likin this and blondie eh? hmmmmmmmm |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sweet write *s M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That twinkle and smile can take you on a wonderful journey. I enjoyed this romantic read. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
First sight says it all.... good write... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How neat! I like this one. Nan |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Twinkletime Your reply twinkles…thank you Twinklemigo Thanks for twinkling in TwinkleTindal Sprinkles of twinkles to tickle you Twinklevarner Have you ever seen an insect with twinkling blonde hair Twinklenity Tingling twinkles for you anytime Twinkletoria Twinkle times two back at you Twinklepossom Thanks for seeing the twinkles twinkling Twinkletoe Angel Twinkletoe threw the tulips…thanks Twinklois Blondes have more twinkles Twinklethoughts Nakedtwinkles Twinklesun May all your twinkles be romantic Twinkler Twinkling Twinkleimage Twinkles of thanks |
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