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Open Poetry #18

Beauty and Bruises

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

0 posted 2002-01-27 10:24 PM

Beauty does shine through
A black and blue sky above
Rainbows slay bruised skies

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-01-27 10:41 PM

oh i like this, I love to look at rainbows and puffy clouds..

nice haiku

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2002-01-27 11:26 PM

Beautiful poem little lady..
alan

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-27 11:34 PM

YAY!!! (smiles) Through every gray sky there will always be a silver lining of promise of beauty to follow, and a rainbow of love will come to greet our days! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-01-28 07:45 AM

Morcastlin,
I would never have thought this would be about the sky until I read it. Now I couldn't imagine it being about anything else.
Original in concept and presentation.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-01-28 08:20 AM

clear and meaningful haiku, write on

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-28 10:43 AM

Morc, this is the best haiku I have read so far and I have read many. wonderful, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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