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Will I Ever Be Loved? (My First Poem Ever Written)
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Will I Ever Be Loved? (My First Poem Ever Written) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(I noticed some poets were posting their first poems, this is the first post I ever made almost two years ago. It's very sad, but I don't feel nearly as sad as I did then) Will I Ever Be Loved? By: Noah Eaton 2/2/00 They say they hope I find my true love someday An ode to maybe I wish that I could forsake I’m drowning in disarray All I want is someone to love, never again feel lonely Every chance I get, I try to smile But my dismay makes it not worth my while If only all true love was docile Can anybody see I’m falling in misery Am I doomed to live a life Without someone by my side I feel so scared inside Left hung on the dying tree of despair, a broken puppet So it seems that every tragedy Has some recognition, some opportunity I haven’t heard any catharsis down in front sadly Am I born to be loveless? It seems like everyone belongs to another, to share true love What if I’m different and I’m born to live with half a heart that feels so rough Oh God, I pray to you, please tell me I belong to someone special If I knew just that I’d feel happy, all I want to do is love and feel anything more than sorrow Is there someone for me Will I ever be loved? My world feels so small and empty Will I ever be loved? It seems I have no friends... I am a ghost to everyone... I think I'm coming undone... Save me... Save me... Save me... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-27-2002 06:21 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
aaahhhhh..hugss...i hope you are happier now..and thank you for sharing dear one   ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm glad you don't feel this way now, Noah, everyone is deserving of love and created by a God who loves them. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Noah, this was so heart wrenching but still lovely. My favorite line was "left on the dying tree - a broken puppet." Such maturity in your words always. Thanks for opening your heart and hurts to us. Cheryl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, at the end of winter there is the call of spring. I'm glad you've moved on from this place. I'm glad you have found the special one in RP. *HuGS* to you dear boy...and if you ever need a mother... Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah, this is very well written for your first poem! I'm so glad you have since moved on and found Joanna. You and your writing have gone far...well done! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is very good.... Maybe I will dig up the first one I ever saved... I used to write and write but I never saved anything threw them all away..... They were mostly in prayer form or letter form... I really didn't even think I was writing poetry until some one saw something I had done... : ) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...I don't remember my first...I do know it was about love...imagine that... I know what my first post was on the internet and you have seen that one... I like this poem...you have a lot of feelings expressed within it...and you always have.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow this is great for a first poem Noah, I am so glad you posted this and I hope more poets do. It is nice to see the first works. You have done really good for a first. Yes sad it is. But your feelings really show through. floria Floria |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I can really relate to this Noah. This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Noah, I am so glad to see that you are happy now. You deserve to be happy forever! (hugs) you are loved by all of us here at passions, don't you ever let that slip your mind!  |
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