Open Poetry #18 |
To a dear friend |
ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
To the friend I've found within you someone listening when I talk someone soft to wander into someone with me when I walk To the friend you are beside me sometimes just as lost as I sometimes just to lay beside me hug me tightly as I cry To the friend I see from my side filled with problems of your own all the feelings that you dont hide all the sides you've freely shown To the friend that trusts me dearly telling me the things you feel this alone can only tell me that the girl inside is real To the friend I want to hear this in your life you're not alone many times I try to show this hope you know I'm always "home" To a friend who's touched me deeply always showing that you care when you ask if you're succeeding think of all the love you share To my friend who questions often "Am I loved? Do people care?" Take it from a heart you soften... ...listen to the words I share. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow ThUnDerKySs, I feel like I've been touched by a rare and precious thing...friendship. Well done Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is an absolutely wonderful poem ringing with sincerity. What a great read on this Sunday afternoon. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very beautiful! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice words of appreciation...James |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Oh can I please be her!!! Sorry, trying ta be funny...wonderful heartfelt piece! You are one of the true treasures to be kept close once found. Incredible poem! Just believe... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very well done and much enjoyed! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
damn excuse my bluntness but you are HOT hehe with that said, this poem is so sweet. It is so nice to have a good friend in life. Im sure she will love this poem as much as all of us do. RP |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
Thanks sweetheart - this means so much to me! You're the best. Love ya..... |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
I have a friend who believes in me like this, Oh how wonderful that you are to pen it down for her to hold for times to come, You are trully blessed to open yourself like that.. ~kudos~ Jen |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Kethry: Thank you, glad You enjoyed Irish Rose: Glad I could bring more warm to an already spring-like day Silver Streak: Thank you for your kind words James Michael: Thanks to you amusemi: Sure Thank you for such kind words, mean much to me. Enchantress: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it {{{{{{HugZ}}}}}}} Rose Petal: {blushing} Thank you much! lol Yes, it is a good thing as I have found... Think she liked it too :P lol azure: Glad you liked it sweetie, thank you Love ya too babe jennirey: I've found it is generally much appreciated and touching to tell those around you what they mean to you, I know I like it Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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