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Just Another
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Just Another |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Just another one Within the turning time Notice never once What you uncover Do you know where All the things lay Against the paradox Of the crease of reality Thoughtless cruelty unseen Dwelt in the haunting Up on top looking over Double edged sword Lengthen on stone One heart heard in wonder Awaken beneath fallen eyes See what the horizon controls Paraphrased in sculptured chaos Surrounds your being of walls A grand facade of wholeness Captured glimpses of the lost So much leaving your grasp Reaching for the unknown What lies there in mystery Splendid flight across the beauty So much of hidden answers Fleeting life forever "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A grand facade of wholeness Captured glimpses of the lost I liked that! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Justbleu, Fabulous images. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very nice imagery and a smooth read! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Ooohhhhhhh...oh my gosh, we're all so happy to see you again, we've all missed you so much, this is a wonderful poem! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may all your life's answers come your way and fill your heart with a smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well this certainly not just another poem. Lovely to read your work again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
There are so many layers to this. "Do you know where All the things lay Against the paradox Of the crease of reality" This alone provides so much food for thought. Time itself keeps changing that crease of reality, thereby swallowing many truths. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
another thought. . . for us to consider. . . thank you for sharing. . . and it's nice to see you again my friend. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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